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Lynny
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Hungary
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 Posted - 2006/06/10 : 22:33:39
For the first time in my live i tryed to make a tune with some vocal. This is my voice, as i have no other singer in my surrounding. Listen it, please, and tell me your opinion.
www.soundclick.com/lynny
Never feel alone
Never thought once i would like to
leave the Earth behind
Jump up to the silver sky
and spread my wings to fly
Among 1000 brighting stars
where only u and me
This time i know where i belong
and where's my place to be
And i never feel alone
and i never feel alone
Since there is a dream love
in my heart
I never feel alone
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XtarsiA
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United Kingdom
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Posted - 2006/06/10 : 22:39:02
Hey there :D
u know how much i like your voice  (and you  )
your mellody is very catchy, i have even been humming it from time to time 
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Lynny
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Hungary
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 Posted - 2006/06/10 : 22:43:26
Thx! Im happy that u like it! (I like your voice too, lol)
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Sk8SiM
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Posted - 2006/06/10 : 23:22:59
its a good track :D nice effort as i've tryed using my voice in tracks before and... its SUCKS! lol
so nice one
track also has a nice flow
Hungary ay?
same place shadra shine is from enit? haha
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Lynny
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Hungary
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Posted - 2006/06/11 : 11:57:41
Thx! I hope i will be better in the future.
Hungary is in the middle-east Europe. And we also have raves, lol.
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Simon
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Belgium
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Posted - 2006/06/11 : 13:55:58
I think the important thing here is that we all like each others voices....Awwwww! 
Seriously though, it's a really good effort. Liking this a lot. It could do with touching up here and there, but regardless this track IS an achievement, and all credit to you for being brave enough to record your own vocals and use them. The lyrical content is superb, the voice is nice, the pronunciation of the English words is good as well.
Play this track a couple of times people and you will not be dissapointed!
Top marks - Well done and thanks for sharing your music with us.
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Fishy
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Posted - 2006/06/11 : 15:48:45
Well to be honest it diden't impress me to much.. But it was good enough tho! keep it up
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CorDharel
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Posted - 2006/06/11 : 17:18:49
Impressive sounds... what program are you using?
Hey you sound a lil bit like dido I could use your voice for my tracks
And I agree with Toiletfish that there is much potential in your voice.
But the tracks cool... made me happy
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Ionosphere
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United Kingdom
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Posted - 2006/06/11 : 18:06:29
Hey, Lynny, I like it.
Your voice is very good, especially for Happy Hardcore but what I'm not to keen on is the chord progression.
Could you alter it slightly to make it a little more imaginative. I'm sure that Luke would help if you're stuck....
Yeh, really nice but it has so much more potential. This link will take people direct to your tracks - http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=438031
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This- http://www.discogs.com/artist/Ionosphere
THIS - http://soundcloud.com/ionosphere
VIDEO - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5nYWkHCkaho
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Lynny
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Hungary
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Posted - 2006/06/11 : 18:49:12
Thanks guys for all of the comments! Im very happy that u listened my tune, and shared your opinion! And thanks for the link! Cheers!
I use Fruity Loops. (Or i try to use it with more or less success,lol)
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Charco
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Ireland
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Posted - 2006/06/11 : 19:35:57
Had a listen, and like it a lot!!
It's got an almost 'raw energy' feel to it....Reminds me a bit of the very early scooter tunes.
The singing is sweet too...but IF I could change anything, It would be the cords that go along with what your singing. I would alter them to conflict a bit with your singing and it could make your singing stand out more. (Think ionosphere already mentioned something like this...not sure  ).
All in all- A great track and as it's only still a demo....A LOT of potential. Wouldn't be surprised if one of your songs made it onto a compliation CD at some point...
Great work.
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