NeXuS
Advanced Member
United States
1,627 posts
Joined: Nov, 2004
81 hardcore releases
|
 Posted - 2006/06/28 : 17:55:45
haha nice try, but just isnt my style.
You need a new kickdrum mate! Just doesnt flow like a bangin hardcore track should. Maybe develop a thicker bass and beat line with drums and clashes.
Anyway both of those tunes had only one mellody running alllllll the way through it (with the exeption of "Untitled" which had a few couple second breaks).
"Untitled 2" kept the same mellody only changing from a piano lead to synth.
Try pitching the bass line to follow the key of the main lead when it changes.
(sorry if this makes no sence :P)
A track needs depth, twists, breaks... unpredictable but flowing...
but hey, im just a dj...
__________________________________
We're gonna start a new revolution...
One that will rock and roll your senses
Alert moderator 
|
Printer friendly
