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CorDharel
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 Posted - 2006/06/30 : 11:23:01
Hello friends!
http://cordharel.bachi.net/sound/CorDharel-Everytime-BritneyReloaded.mp3
Dean gave me 10/10 for this track and I hope you will like it, too 
Happy Hardcore forever!!!
Greetings Cor
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Mortis
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Posted - 2006/06/30 : 11:39:55
It's erm...different.
Wouldn't exactly call it hardcore though.
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Leto
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Posted - 2006/06/30 : 13:18:19
Not bad!
Production wise its nice...but I'll have to give it a closer listen to give you some more feedback.
Delightfully evilly happyish though!
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Squishy Star
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Posted - 2006/06/30 : 14:35:39
I abstluv this song by Britney
and it's strange that you did something with it because a few months back, StrifeII created a tune that <i>reminded</i> me of 'Everytime'
imo i don't really like the vocals bit that you threw in [mainly on about like 1:30 into] because obviously has nothing to do with the flow of the tune if u know what i mean...like if you want to get your name and all that in, might as well just throw it in realy quick in the beginning or summat.
Definitely interesting though - it's like you're actually really listening to a mix into not a remix or something. Don't know if that's what you were after though.
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Ionosphere
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Posted - 2006/06/30 : 14:47:58
At the risk of repeating my previous comments, even though the production is probably your best yet....
....it's out of tune with itself as usual. *shrugs*
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Leto
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Posted - 2006/06/30 : 18:58:10
Doesn't matter how much we try and tell him, he just does the same thing every time.
I guess that's the signature Cordharel sound he's always talking about.
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Chwhynny
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Posted - 2006/06/30 : 20:27:15
Hmz, off-keyness amongst other things. How about taking a look at some of the basics of music theory? Nice try, though. Just think there's a lot of improvement to be made here.
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XtarsiA
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Posted - 2006/06/30 : 21:33:58
that gets me... "music theory"
i know abit, but only becuase its just things ive picked up on the way.
it isnt possable for me to make something out of tune, unless on purpose lol
i simply cant understand how people CANT hear all the de-tune/misstune/out of tune/bad notes ect
they stick out like daggers in my mind!!!!
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CorDharel
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Posted - 2006/07/01 : 16:17:52
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i simply cant understand how people CANT hear all the de-tune/misstune/out of tune/bad notes ect
Show them to me please in this track. I am too stupid yet to understand what you guys mean.
I wanna understand what you mean. Where the hell are these wrong notes? I just don't get it.
Is it the whole track? Or just single pieces?
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Doesn't matter how much we try and tell him, he just does the same thing every time.
I really don't know what you mean.
So guys you are on. Show little "stupid out of tune with every track and off key master super has no theory guy cordharel and understands nothing even if we tell him every time" what you mean because I think I made a cool Britney Spears Remix that would kick every partys ass.
And thanks for the feedback. But I just have to see my faults (that you hear) before I can change myself 
Greetings and a nice saturday evening!
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Chwhynny
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Posted - 2006/07/01 : 16:41:52
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Originally posted by XtarsiA:
that gets me... "music theory"
i know abit, but only becuase its just things ive picked up on the way.
it isnt possable for me to make something out of tune, unless on purpose lol
i simply cant understand how people CANT hear all the de-tune/misstune/out of tune/bad notes ect
they stick out like daggers in my mind!!!!
Yeah, well some people hear things like that, others don't. I have never ever had a music or singing lesson in my life, and I never really missed it. I don't think I've ever produced an off-key track, even when I was 12.
That doesn't make me any better or any less good than someone else... With some people it comes naturally, and with others it just doesn't. It's what you do with that knowledge that counts.
If it takes more effort, invest that time in order to get somewhere if you're serious about production. If someone is just playing around with music for fun, fair enough, then don't bother if learning about it is not going to benefit them. Music should be fun, and there is no such thing as a "perfect track" anyway.
There are a few basics however, that almost everyone agrees on, and if you're serious about producing it's best to stick to those basic rules.
I do worry sometimes when people have been producing for 7 years looking for a record deal, and still do not hear that the offbass isn't in key with the riff, or that it isn't a very good idea to keep the kick, bass, and only riff going for 8 minutes without any changes or progression. In that case I bite my tongue, because the only advice I can give is to give up, heh.
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CorDharel
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Posted - 2006/07/01 : 17:51:16
Great answer! I'll think about it
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