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CorDharel
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Switzerland
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 Posted - 2006/07/10 : 17:20:36
Wow I can't believe my ears. I am actually getting closer to "real" happy hardcore. I found a friend here in switzerland that is also practicing with Reason, and he showed me some tricks with it.
Even the vocals sound okay, can you believe it? 
As the critic for my last track was about the design, I tried to stick at a hardcore track I like. Like there is an intro, a slow part with drum'n'bass and so on.
I hope I also fixed this "wrong notes" part with this track. I took notes that harmonize with each other I hope.
This are the vocals:
Engelssünde
Geachteter Gott, ich muss dir was beichten: ich habe gesündigt
ich habe sex
sex mit menschen!
ich besuche sie in der nacht, treibe es mit ihnen, bis zu 3 Menschen pro Nacht anschliessend verschwinde ich wieder in den himmel...
ach Gott was soll ich nur tun? Ich bin süchtig danach!
I guess you dont understand german I'll translate:
Angels sin
Dear god, I have to confess something to you. I live in sin.
I have sex. Sex with humans!
I visit them at night, f*** them, up to 3 humans per night.
Afterwards I fly back to heaven.
Oh god, what should I do? I got addicted to it!
Here is the download:
http://cordharel.bachi.net/sound/CorDharel-Engelssuende.mp3
I am looking forward to hear some criticism and/or tipps from you.
Greetings Cor
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Edited by - CorDharel on 2006/07/10 17:24:38 |
Leto
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Posted - 2006/07/10 : 17:31:44
It's a good progression from your older stuff...
You sound similar to Devastate and Lee UHF, but you're not quite there.
Listen to some Bedlam, and you'll see what I mean.
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CorDharel
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Switzerland
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Posted - 2006/07/12 : 16:46:17
I know its a long way to go but hey, as long as I get better I'll do it
Sadly I have to learn everything by myself, there is no other happy hardcore creator in my town 
But I always find things out with every new track so I am thinking positive 
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Edited by - CorDharel on 2006/07/12 16:46:31 |
bulby_g
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Posted - 2006/07/12 : 23:17:16
First thing I noticed was that the flow of the track is much better than stuff you've done before... Yeah pretty good this mate I like it and the vocals are better :)
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CorDharel
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Posted - 2006/07/16 : 13:13:43
Thank you
After hearing it 200 - 500 times I think the vocals could still need some work.
I just love the part where the angel say "I have sex... sex with humans" 
Oh and the drum and bass part. I started to create my own drum and bass pattern instead of just taking prepared one.
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Edited by - CorDharel on 2006/07/16 13:14:25 |
CorDharel
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Switzerland
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Posted - 2006/07/16 : 13:15:09
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Originally posted by CorDharel:
Thank you
After hearing it 200 - 500 times I think the vocals could still need some work. It sounds awesome on my home sound system but with headphones its not that good anymore.
I just love the part where the angel say "I have sex... sex with humans"
Oh and the drum and bass part. I started to create my own drum and bass pattern instead of just taking prepared one.
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