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XtarsiA
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United Kingdom
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 Posted - 2006/08/25 : 23:26:19
i still have a long way to go i reackon..
http://sonicshockrecords.net/media/XtarsiA%20-%20Waking%20The%20Dead.mp3
Full Tune, 192kbps mp3, feel free to spread it around lol lol
any and all coments welcome!
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Edited by - XtarsiA on 2006/08/25 23:32:01 |
Lynny
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 Posted - 2006/08/26 : 14:26:22
That version i heared is very very good, so keep it up! I dont want to download now to my godmothers comp, so i only can listen it later if thers any new in it!
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DigitalForces
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Posted - 2006/08/26 : 15:12:04
listening now. kickdrum could be a bit more pronounced, just to give it that bit more power its asking for. id make that main synth a bit more beefy, you fade it in and out way too much taking the hardcore sound/edge away from the track. You could make it sound alot more powerful, really nice synth tho..
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Ionosphere
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Posted - 2006/08/26 : 17:45:05
I agree with DigitalForces' comments and would add that the Lead riff could do with being
dropped for 16 bars in places to be replaced with something else to keep the interest going.
Good work though.
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Leto
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Posted - 2006/08/27 : 12:50:56
This sounds a bit different than the one I have...is this the Hattrixx assissted version?
It sounds like it is...and you know what?
It needs to be sped up! :P
You're original has just a little bit more energy than this...although me likes the breakbeat section.
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Edited by - Leto on 2006/08/27 12:54:16 |
XtarsiA
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Posted - 2006/08/27 : 14:42:50
nope, this is 100% my own doing  i did learn alot from just watching Hattrixx work tho..
i hear what ur sayin about the too much of the lead, and fadeing in and out too much, but i kinda ran out of enthusiasm for it...
this is in the key of G#, the original was in C, and this version is 6bpm slower lol
if u want leto, i can render a version in C @180bpm for u
got summit new in the works aswell...
its called "Secrets" he he :D
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Edited by - XtarsiA on 2006/08/27 14:48:46 |
Leto
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Posted - 2006/08/27 : 15:18:42
Ah, I see the difference.
I like the updated version, it sounds real professional.
Don't worry about the speed. I guess I might like it better in C...but it's okay.
Good work...you'll prolly be seein' it in my next mix...whenever that happens.
Is it cool if I play it on the radio here in the US? Non-profit radio station...
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XtarsiA
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Posted - 2006/08/27 : 17:01:54
of course u can play it :D
and thanx :D
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Vista
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Posted - 2006/08/27 : 22:43:18
Huge potential dude sounded really good, Needs tidying up here and there etc. etc. but what doesn't keep going with it
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