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DJBrownout
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 Posted - 2006/09/30 : 23:58:48
http://www.myupload.biz/f/r29/81273/Breeze+u+Styles+-+Drop+The+Beats+%28Brownout+Remix+Re-Edit%29.mp3
First tune I seriously tried to remix/producing...I'm new to remixing and just want some feedback thanks :)
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walla13
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Posted - 2006/10/01 : 00:43:17
hi think it sound very good you should do more like that and i will be happy
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Mad Max
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Posted - 2006/10/01 : 10:46:35
is this version different to ur last one?
i like the last one u posted of this have even mixed it. let me know if it is different and will dl and give a listen.
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Jax
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Posted - 2006/10/01 : 12:02:17
some nice elements to that mate good work. things id point out with my limited knowledge are it sounds a bit hollow, the bass needs to be louder or layered, same with the synth
EDIT: http://www.ush.net/board/viewtopic.php?t=195757&view=newest < give this a read for how to make a hardcore bass, lots of lovly info 
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DJBrownout
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Posted - 2006/10/01 : 23:14:37
quote:
Originally posted by Mad Max:
is this version different to ur last one?
i like the last one u posted of this have even mixed it. let me know if it is different and will dl and give a listen.
ya i redid it
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XenatR
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Posted - 2006/10/02 : 00:46:24
that melody with that instrument is so cute :P
keep it the same.. dont change it :'(
the one from 1:06-1:29. its so nice :D
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Dain-Ja
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Posted - 2006/10/02 : 03:21:14
good track
but it's too "simple", work on having some percussion changes and making it more "complex" overall
layering synths could be good too
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Project-Industrial
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Posted - 2006/10/02 : 07:54:37
well im startin a happy track at the moment i did one techno track before but i keep it simple to start aswell dain-ja.. gotta learn in some way ..
good track!!
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Mad Max
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Posted - 2006/10/02 : 16:56:46
cant get this to dl :-( i aint stupid the site maybe be in german but i get where to klicken but it just doesnt work.
brownout mate would love to listen to it i like the first one this can only be better
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DJBrownout
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Posted - 2006/10/03 : 02:27:40
http://www.sendspace.com/file/l5d8jo
Alternative link for those who coulnd't use the other one.
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Phobz
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Posted - 2006/10/03 : 09:04:37
Really like this remix Brownout it just seems a bit flat. Have you used effects on the synth / bass channels? Apart from that it sounding sweet, maybe when the synth comes in some nice strings to fill the track a bit more. I really do like how its sounding (better than B & S's) hehe 
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DJBrownout
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Posted - 2006/10/03 : 15:23:15
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Originally posted by Phobz:
Really like this remix Brownout it just seems a bit flat. Have you used effects on the synth / bass channels? Apart from that it sounding sweet, maybe when the synth comes in some nice strings to fill the track a bit more. I really do like how its sounding (better than B & S's) hehe
Thanks man...but i really dont know too much about the program I'm using (furity loops 6) so it will probably sound basic for awhile. I had to t teach myself to use it so far :(
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Dain-Ja
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Posted - 2006/10/03 : 15:46:37
get some more VSTs and try stuff out
try putting some reverb and detune on the synth to make it sound less flat
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Phobz
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Posted - 2006/10/03 : 16:05:05
Yea same here to mate, keep it up and you'll be hammering out killer tunes before you know it :)
If you learn what Dain-Ja said there it will sound bang on. Ask about it on the Music Production bit on this site i'm sure someone will be willing to help out
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Mad Max
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Posted - 2006/10/03 : 16:54:14
nice thanks mate.
like it again. bass is better alot fuller sounding. it dont really know any thing about producing but i feel it just needs a little extra something like background pad noises or something to give a wee bit more atmosphere.
keep up the good work mate and hope ur skills continue to progress
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