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MaGiC_MuShRooM
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 Posted - 2007/02/05 : 17:39:37
Any feedback is welcomed!
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e-lucid
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United Kingdom
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Posted - 2007/02/05 : 18:21:38
I like it, although the vocals were sometimes hard to make out and the melody seemed a bit lacking, it all worked well and the middle (2:40-3:20) was very good.
I loved the synths & kicks you used at the beginning, kinda thought the tune would go in an entirely different direction before a melody came in, well done though!
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MaGiC_MuShRooM
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Posted - 2007/02/05 : 22:13:29
Hey mate thanks for the feedback. I took into account what you said, and i agree with you, the melody was lacking, so i changed it. I also scrapped that part in the middle and made it a complete gabber part. Hope it sounds ok.
Have another listen.
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Project-Industrial
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Posted - 2007/02/05 : 22:27:10
i didnt really like the melodie... the gabber part ws nice.. but.. i like ma gabber louder :p hehe
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Pope C XXIII
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Posted - 2007/02/06 : 01:30:23
Pretty nice tune you've got here. I actually really liked the melody. It stands out against a lot of happycore being produced these days. It has something of formal, almost classical feel to it. Really nice flow into the gabber section. After the gabber breakdown, I started to get bored though. It all lacked the euphoria I was hoping for, and didn't really change from the beginning section. I have three remedies for this:
1. Rely less on the samples (which sound a little awkward and lo fi anyways.)
2. More changeup in the lead, especially in the tone you use. Remember, synthesizers can do anything, and you can make them do way more than just one sound.
3. This is just my personal taste, but I think you should go straight into left field and play around there by adding classical elements. Like a huge orchestra of pizzicatto violin samples bouncing along to the main melody. Feel free to be a little weird. I'm certainly more interested in seeing genres collide than I am in hearing another typical song of one genre.
Although those suggestions would definitely move the song too far into UK/freeform territory for the gabber breakdown to make any sense. I'd suggest a huge symphonic breakdown where all the orchestral sounds come in.
(philharmonia.co.uk has a huge orchestral/solo sample database. All free downloads in .wav format. Thought it would be useful  )
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Vista
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United Kingdom
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Posted - 2007/02/06 : 12:47:58
Loved the 'actual lyrics' I didn't mind the melody either has that 'classical - oldskool' feel about it and the way the vocal slipped into the gabber break was good but a little more energy in that part would be nicer but overall your onto something lad or lady :) I didn't check soz :P
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