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shakes
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 Posted - 2007/04/07 : 18:11:04
Hardcore Vocal Track, have a listen, let us know wot u think. Cheers.
http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?PID=964873&T=1850
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Future_Shock
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Posted - 2007/04/10 : 16:48:36
its not a bad track mate. if you wanted feedback...
The bass is fairly wobbly have you layered the bass? coz it just doesnt sit right to me. that arpreggiation when it comes in sounds pretty repetitive in my opinion and it also is WAY too loud for the mixdown of the track it drowns everything else out when the kickdrum should be the loudest part. The chord progression is a lot happy i just dont like how the whole thing is arpreggiated chords. Try and make a melody out of what youve got there. Through and through lots of good ideas in that track, just need some practice on how to bring them out imo.
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bulby_g
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Posted - 2007/04/10 : 22:08:33
The kick isn't deep enough add a low layer too it,
When you change the bass progression make it longer and more varied,
The Arp is too loud as Influx says,
The whole track feels a little dry take a look at your reverb and delay effects on everything,
The vocals are just getting completely lost behind the riffs you need to sort your EQ'ing there… There not very clear when they play on their own either, clean them up.
Not a bad effort though mate, keep at it.
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