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Future_Shock
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 Posted - 2007/05/01 : 05:12:28
ive uploaded this track a few times now ive taken all the suggestions people have given me and uploaded it again after a master (done by me)
let me know what you all think!
http://download.yousendit.com/E2C3C00B2A0D1096
Updated Bass and Gabber part in the middle:
http://download.yousendit.com/135335FB70B7DCE5
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Edited by - Future_Shock on 2007/05/02 04:48:38 |
tru bass
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Posted - 2007/05/01 : 18:22:40
rreally good
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Leto
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Posted - 2007/05/02 : 00:22:44
It's nice. I still think the bass kind of overshadows whatever else the songs has going for it. The bass is really loose and soft...seems to clash with the synth a bit....but then again. It grows on you.
Great work overall, technically.
It sort of goes around in circles, and kind of loses it's freshness by the second breakdown.
Stilll, I could only dream of producing a track like that.
:D
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Future_Shock
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Posted - 2007/05/02 : 01:37:10
wow thanks guys that actually means a lot considering as its made in fl studio and i dont have studio monitors... i was kind of worried that i wouldnt get a good mixdown but it seems i can. CHEERS!
Leo i know what you mean i kinda of lost the 'feel' for the track a while ago as its been in production so long... kinda just... ran out of ideas.... I wanted to put a little gabber section in the middle of it instead of the pad fading back in.... how do you think that will sit?
Id love to hear anything else anyone else has to say about it.
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Future_Shock
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Posted - 2007/05/02 : 07:52:25
updates, put a mad gabber section in the middle.
Would still like to hear some thoughts from people... criticisms anything
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Leto
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 Posted - 2007/05/02 : 12:06:02
Very nice! I think the gabber section works really well.
Nice update on the bass...it fits the track better. But perhaps the reverb on the synth could come down a little.
Just a thought...
Anyway, very nice work.
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Pope C XXIII
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Posted - 2007/05/02 : 20:08:14
Hmm...I don't want to be too harsh, but...I was bored. It's really nothing special to me, and a tad annoying in how unoriginal it felt. That and it felt too slow to pull off such a lack of action.
My suggestion: speed it up, more variation in the ungated sections of the lead, chop the vocals way more and with more variation, add off beat hoovers and some snares to the gabber breakdown, and maybe some crazy 303 action at the end.
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bulby_g
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Posted - 2007/05/02 : 22:07:10
Ahh... I hate these upload sites :(
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