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~DJ~DIZZY~D~
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 Posted - 2007/06/15 : 14:48:57
AFTER READING THE TOPIC OF BOUNCY TECHNO ON HERE I DECIDED TO HAVE A GO AT MAKING A TUNE, VERY BASIC ITS MY FIRST TUNE I HAVE EVER MADE AND HOP TO DEVELOP FROM IT, ITS 95 STYLE BUT MADE IN 2007, ANYWAY TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK AND LEAVE SOME FEEDBACK PLZZZ PLZZZ, CHEERS
http://www.mediafire.com/?8vqyixzu3s0
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Pope C XXIII
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Posted - 2007/06/15 : 17:35:37
Pretty good! I'd put it more down as an oldschool Rotterdam track, but it's pretty nice. A few critiques though.
1. Go for a different lead sound. The current one isn't hoovery enough.
2. Layer an offbeat underneath the main lead.
3. Mess with the kick a little bit. You've got it nice and fat enough, but make it heavier and bassier.
4. Capslock should be used sparingly, and it's spelled "please" 
Pretty cool!
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~DJ~DIZZY~D~
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Posted - 2007/06/15 : 17:50:05
hahaha caps lock is off, thankyou please, thanks for the feedback i am tring to get a sort of mix between the scottish andd dutch, i feel although there is loads i could do with it just needs neatening up and finishing off
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Smoogie
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 Posted - 2007/06/16 : 09:50:14
Thats a good attempt, I can slowly see a comeback ariving! The bit towards the end is good! 
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95_was_the_time
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Posted - 2007/08/31 : 18:04:39
mooooooore! moooore!
/claps
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