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~DJ~DIZZY~D~
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 Posted - 2007/06/16 : 12:39:57
SPENT ALL OF YESTERDAY AND THIS MORNING DOING THIS ONE, ITS AN IMPROVEMENT FROM THE LAST ONE AND I TOOK TIPS I GOT GIVEN AND DID WHAT I UNDERSTOOD TO DO, SOME THINGS PEOPLE SAY I DONT UNDERSTAND YET SO JUST TRY AND BEAR WITH ME CAUSE I AM LEARNING.
http://www.mediafire.com/?0nz1hdyl3i2
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Pope C XXIII
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Posted - 2007/06/16 : 15:38:53
Umm....I'm not sure how to break this to ya, but... you didn't change anything. There's a different riff and a different sample, but all the problems the other tune had, this one has. The kick is still too thin, the sound you're using is still kind of lame, the progression is just as random sounding, and it's still way too minimal. The first one was actually kind of okay, but this just sucked. Sorry, but I'm not sure what else to say.
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~DJ~DIZZY~D~
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Posted - 2007/06/16 : 18:00:32
ok no bother m8, are you into the bouncy techno stuff or not?? just thats what i am going for, raw basic stuff, bass-x morphine type tune, i know its not amazing but its a start anyway....at least you left feedback
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Pope C XXIII
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Posted - 2007/06/16 : 21:07:26
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Originally posted by ~DJ~DIZZY~D~:
ok no bother m8, are you into the bouncy techno stuff or not??
I'm a huge fan of bouncy techno, and I love the raw, minimal stuff, but there's a certain sense about it that those minimal tracks have that keeps them interesting, that's lacking in this tune.
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~DJ~DIZZY~D~
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Posted - 2007/06/17 : 13:47:33
ai i know what ya mean, it needs more going on in it, maybe the arrangement needs tweaking and the melody needs a lot more work...anyway cheers m8 i am gonna stick at it and see what i come up with, think i am going to work on them longer than a day just i need a proppa version of fruity loops, not just the demo version......i will keep u informed on how i am doing if thats all right m8, every couple of months or so
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