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Siliconwolf
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 United Kingdom
5 posts Joined: Jul, 2007
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Posted - 2007/07/20 : 14:42:12
Since Im new to this Forum, I thought the best way to start off was to post one of my songs. Im pretty new to music creation and "Gabba" production and I dont know how many people here like that genre of Hardcore but, anyway, Ill give it ago. Keep in mind this is my First proper song on FL Studio. =D
Heres the link:
http://www.zshare.net/audio/27726672cf401d Comments would help, Enjoy =D
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Edited by - Siliconwolf on 2007/07/20 14:59:11 |
Pope C XXIII
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 United States
1,935 posts Joined: Oct, 2006
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Posted - 2007/07/20 : 19:40:44
1. Make the kick heavier. It's a little too bland.
2. The clap is too punchy. Get a bare 909 clap and distort the shit out of it, and layer it on top of every kick beat w/ lots of fills. Works every time.
3. Try to get things flowing better, with some well timed kick fills, and place more emphasis/time on the melody (and make the melody at the end more intense sounding. Replace it with a hoover.)
4. With a little work, you've got some good oldschool style gabber!
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