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Pope C XXIII
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Posted - 2007/08/25 : 23:41:04
I've been in a bit of a rut lately, so I decided to give making UK/Upfront/Vocal hardcore a try, and this is what I managed to create (and it's pretty cool.) Still needs vocals, some major mixdown work (mostly for getting the right amount of volume), and a fair few more kick fills, but I'm still interested in what you all have to think about it. Thanks!
Edit: Just fixed it up loads. Way better breakdown now, a better mixdown (though still too quiet), and more kick fills.
http://www.tau.sickpigrecords.co.uk/currently_untitled_UK_hardcore.mp3 Edit: Fixed it up even more. It's about as finished as it's going to be, and if this one is good enough, I'll send it to Purefocus for mastering. http://www.tau.sickpigrecords.co.uk/untitled%20UK%20hardcore%20mostly%20finished%20version.mp3
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Posted - 2007/08/26 : 19:23:25
Bump, because I just made some major revisions to the track.
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nightfire
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Posted - 2007/08/26 : 20:57:51
nicely done my son. very trancey, just how i like it, and loving the breakbeat and dnb breaks in them.
any name for it yet?
you gunna put any vocal over it or leave as is?
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Pope C XXIII
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Posted - 2007/08/26 : 23:52:12
quote: Originally posted by nightfire:
nicely done my son. very trancey, just how i like it, and loving the breakbeat and dnb breaks in them.
any name for it yet?
you gunna put any vocal over it or leave as is?
Hmm, I'll try and get ahold of a singer, but if not, I could end up leaving it as is.
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Leto
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Posted - 2007/08/27 : 00:57:09
Well, the percussion sounds a bit stale.
And the pads are almost too spacey, they need more oomph. This is very untechnical advice.
Cool idea, mixdown needs work...the breakdown needs more pads and riff and less percussion..it's very pretty!
Yeah, the percussion and bass overpower the track. And the track is structured weird, so that all the synths seem like they are in the background, I think you need more layering or something. I like the sounds though.
:D Cool stuff.
Breaks breakdown is very nice.
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tru bass
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Posted - 2007/08/27 : 12:23:28
youve posted on all my songs so its only fair if i post on one of yours :)
i want that bassline.
and that kick.
theres nothing i could add to that song except vocals really.
overall great good job ;)
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DJCrissy
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Posted - 2007/08/27 : 12:36:35
im more into the old stuff really but sounds good only i agree with the rest it does need some vocals in there but overall not bad.
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luminate
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Posted - 2007/08/27 : 12:44:26
very nice indeed!
can see a LOT of potential for that one :D
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Meathead
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Posted - 2007/08/27 : 13:36:54
tbh i dont really think it needs vocals over it. if u wanna put some on it then ok it'll probly sound great but i'm lovin it just the way it is. likin the breaks breakdown and what leto said i think the first breakdown needs a little riff and it'll be spot on ;)
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Posted - 2007/08/28 : 22:24:54
bump
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Ionosphere
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Posted - 2007/08/30 : 00:40:29
....I'm thinking about it....
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Posted - 2007/08/30 : 01:33:09
Bump for more massive edits. Big ups to the guys at ush who helped out too.
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Posted - 2007/08/30 : 16:16:08
What Leto said except that I love the spacey pads.
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95_was_the_time
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Posted - 2007/08/30 : 16:19:28
don't like it, make somthing in a 95 style.
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