Future_Shock
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Australia
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Joined: Apr, 2007
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 Posted - 2007/08/28 : 11:02:39
without it being mixed or mastered its just about impossible to give a worthwhile comment on how your production is going...
Like for example, i dont really like that kick and i actually think its way too loud or overcompressed im not sure though because its not mixed, if its just a level problem then in a mixdown youd fix that. So theres no point commenting on it.
I also didnt really like that build up i think the rise at the end kind of sucked how the riser pitched itself up but the synth didnt... i thought that sounded weird.
On the upside i did really like the main riff to the track it was pretty catchy. The track ahs potential but theres quite a few things that just agitated me a little bit. Nothing too serious. But i didnt like how the piano faded channels during the breakdown. Thats just personal rpeference though. And also i didnt really notice any percussion... but once again it could be there and you could fix it in the mixdown...
I really wouldnt post something on here asking for feedback to something you havent even attempted to mix... Its just my honest opinion but i think you should only been posting something for feedback if you have it as good as you're going to get, or you're stuck at one point and dont know what to do with it. Im not having a go or anything, but just for future reference. :)
The track has a lot of potential jsut a few minor things here and there. Nice job.
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