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Future_Shock
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 Posted - 2007/08/29 : 07:42:37
you've heard it before but i changed/added some stuff
http://download.yousendit.com/D8E978FE19EECDBC
Its a short clip, very small file (less than 3 mb)
leave feedback if you want, or even just tell me if you liked it or hated it!
cheers guys!!
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novaboy
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Posted - 2007/08/29 : 10:17:30
hi influx
ill give you what/what i dont like in it, probably not worth listening to, but ill jut have a look
the had some kind of eq maybe that i like, nice trancey melody line. nice breakdown, nice squarey synth that comes in :D i think something more should happen when the 2 steppy drums come in near the end of the breakdown.. nice climax
good work so far !
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Future_Shock
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Posted - 2007/08/29 : 10:24:40
that post confused me so much....
how can you say isnt worth listening to before you heard it?
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tru bass
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Posted - 2007/08/29 : 19:35:38
niice like it alot!
dont know why but seems a bit slow to me :-S
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bulby_g
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Posted - 2007/08/29 : 20:17:51
This is amazing, heaps improved from the last one I heard!
Really good man, can't fault it. Will certainly be wanting the full version :)
Only thing I'd say is possibly add some acid in with the main riff half way though the section it plays for (or another sound of some sort) to add extra interest to that part of the track.
The bass seems a little on the thin side too...
Really fecking good stuff though!! Love all the little effects you've put in, levels are all good, the tracks really solid and just all comes together so nicely.
*edit*
Nova means his feedback may not be worth listening to, not the track. ;)
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Future_Shock
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Posted - 2007/08/29 : 20:22:14
oh fair enough about nova, sorry dude.
Thanks for the feedbck so far guys.
P.S. Bulby thats not that track from before that you couldn't find hahahaha...
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bulby_g
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Posted - 2007/08/29 : 20:23:17
quote:
Originally posted by Influx:
P.S. Bulby thats not that track from before that you couldn't find hahahaha...
Ah cool, will hunt the other out :). Have edited my feedback after another listen BTW.
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NeXuS
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Posted - 2007/08/29 : 23:14:15
Really enjoying this piece!
Bulbz had it right, adding somthing to the last half of the main riff section would add alot to it. Make it progress.
You've gotta let me know when its finished too :)
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Jax
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Posted - 2007/08/29 : 23:30:53
As im listening to it...
Nice intro, it builds up nice. First drop could do with a bit more stuff happening i think, maybe a white noise going up once its went down or something.. @ 1min 9secs the sound that comes in sounds a bit cheesy (for my taste), id personally prefer something a bit harder going on at this point, @ 2mins 5secs it might sound better if you were to put a double kick where the synth does a double stab? probably just a personal preferance but i think it might sound better than way. On my pc speakers, the lead sounds a bit weak but on my monitors it sounds ok so maybe worth having a listen on some cheaper speakers..
Overall its a good tune. Hope some of this might of been some use.
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novaboy
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Posted - 2007/08/30 : 08:48:00
quote:
Originally posted by Influx:
that post confused me so much....
how can you say isnt worth listening to before you heard it?
i meant that my view isnt worth listening.. lol
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Posted - 2007/08/30 : 08:49:18
...not the track
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Future_Shock
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Posted - 2007/08/30 : 12:58:44
hahaha yeah its all good man bulbs cleared it up a few posts ago, chillax my friend.
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novaboy
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Posted - 2007/08/30 : 13:03:41
ah k:)
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95_was_the_time
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Posted - 2007/08/30 : 16:05:19
average, didn't move an inch of my eyebrows. probably because you're jumping on the Asda synth lines bandwaggon.
start again.
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NeXuS
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Posted - 2007/08/30 : 17:48:07
quote:
Originally posted by 95_was_the_time:
average, didn't move an inch of my eyebrows. probably because you're jumping on the Asda synth lines bandwaggon.
We all start somwhere
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Posted - 2007/08/30 : 17:48:30
quote:
Originally posted by 95_was_the_time:
average, didn't move an inch of my eyebrows.
start again.
Haha coincidence! thats what God's critic said when he made you.
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