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Bencow
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Joined: Aug, 2007
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 Posted - 2007/10/11 : 16:54:19
Here's the track as good as its gonna get for free! I have taken in all the advice from my first posting and I am really happy with the result.
Feel free to post any comments you feel, even if you think its crap tell me why!
Hope you enjoy my work
Bencow
http://homepage.ntlworld.com/mrbencow007/Audio/Project%20KS4%20Final%20Web%20Mix.mp3
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Pope C XXIII
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Posted - 2007/10/11 : 20:15:03
Thought the intro was pretty cool, and the bass is sweet, but aside from that, not really into it. Maybe it's that I think the riff sounds a tad cheesy, or perhaps it's just that the structure just felt off. Couldn't really feel it at all. Also, why'd you upload it in 96kps or some similarly low quality format? Can't really give any advice on mixdown if it's not at its highest quality.
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Hardcore & trance inna oldskool style
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Mortis
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341 hardcore releases
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Posted - 2007/10/11 : 21:13:34
I still like this track, has loads of potential but doesn't seem to build on it 
Like the main riff - very J-Core.
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Bencow
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Posted - 2007/10/11 : 21:29:12
The Files is mp3 128-320kbps Mp3 Stereo. I admit the structure is not classic hardcore. Its a free style composition. I find in most songs the structure comes from the lyrics. Here there are non, so I just let the track find it own way. Maybe not to everybody's taste and thats fine.
Bencow
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