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sync
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 Posted - 2007/10/31 : 08:38:22
Hi guys , this is a brand new venture for me, I've been listening to hardcore for a while now but never actually made any myself, I've been producing idm music for a couple of years now and have been itching to get some hardcore together, would love to know what you think , where to improve etc.
http://www.freshcut.org/realitycheck.mp3
Oh if anyone wants to download this and drop it in there hardcore mixes feel free! I don't mind :)
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Pope C XXIII
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Posted - 2007/10/31 : 18:51:43
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redwingz
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Posted - 2007/10/31 : 19:13:04
hes right, page not found
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sync
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Posted - 2007/10/31 : 19:28:36
sorry guys should work now
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redwingz
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Posted - 2007/10/31 : 20:34:29
writing as i listen:
the opening beat isnt very powerful, the drums doesnt seem loud enuff.
seems a bit empty at some points
The beat for the main tune (around 2min 30) isnt very prominent, i prefer a louder drumbeat
im no expert, only just started producing myseelf, but for me thee drums arnt loud enuff throughout. Its not fast enuff (i dunno wot the bpm count is but i like it quicker) and its a bit to......erm.....psychadelic for me. also i dunno if id class it as hardcore, wat does every1 else think?
for your 1st attempt its very good, and better than what i can do, so keep going. some of the other ppl will be able giv u better feedback than me, there sum real experts at producing in this forum and im not 1 of them haha
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Shades
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Posted - 2007/11/01 : 13:08:13
my 2 cents: your off beat bass needs to come in sooner & be more prominent in the mix, good use of risers & fx, but the whole track does need to be harder, as redwingz said it's very psychadelic, not sure the difference in styles work, it's like a hardcore/ambient/ chill out mix with very little hardcore....
it does sound better the second time around, maybe too much breakbeat is letting it down, need more beef in your bass & kick
good effort though, it's definitely catchy dude, i normally only get half way through a posted track, listened to this 3 times startm to finish
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J.T.S
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Posted - 2007/11/01 : 23:32:46
Thats some crazy stuff...def not hardcore 2 me, well i guess it is in away just needs less break beat and more straight kick and bassline but I guess its depends on what sorta hardcore u where aiming for.
Love the key changes in the riff.
Could make into a phatt freeform tune
Nice work
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