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HarryFilleul
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United Kingdom
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Joined: Nov, 2007
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 Posted - 2007/11/03 : 17:58:28
Hey people, been producing for a while now, was wondring if you could review one of my best songs atm. If you go to my artist URL: www.myspace.com/harryfilleul it's the first song to play, it's called "its all in your head". Hope you guys enjoy!
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novaboy
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Australia
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Posted - 2007/11/04 : 01:10:28
nice starting pads, the strings are a tad loud. the piano showing itself is alright, i dont like the phase and pan although. when the piano comes in more there are some eq problems, but its still good, a good pattern. the kick came in a bit to fast in my opinion, no snare roll or anything, offbeat bass is too soft. I think this song has too many strings etc in it, and the volume levels have to be sorted. It was all in key im pretty sure. The song had no saw lead synth or anything, it was just layered strings, a square-sine bass and percussion. It's sitll pretty good, but it strays a bit from the original hardcore formula.
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HarryFilleul
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Posted - 2007/11/04 : 11:53:37
cheers, your feedback is v kind and useful. I was trying for a sort of different kind of thing, plus there has to be a lot of strings because its for my music GCSE so it has to all be "musical" and shit. I'll bare your advice in mind form mi next song.
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