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Djburn
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United Kingdom
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Joined: Oct, 2005
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 Posted - 2007/12/20 : 18:32:25
hi there everyone i have made a new hardcore tune bare in mind it is still in development so some areas may sound off or out but generally would like to have many opinions of the current development of the new tune im working on,
To hear the tune follow link below.
http://tunezfactory.com/djburn-personal/projects/raw_power_remix.mp3
Here from you all soon :)
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chappy_hardcore
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United Kingdom
284 posts
Joined: Apr, 2006
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Posted - 2008/01/03 : 18:52:23
Steady away is that mate!
One of the better tunes i've heard from the underground/up-and-coming artists. Now, heres for the constructive critism from my opinion.
The "raw power" vocal sample is annoying, its too loud and in your face, which is a bad thing because i personally do not think that its an attractive sample, turn the volume of it down and the frequency.
On the other hand, i like how your tune progresses, i think you should drop in a breakdown in their or something to give it an edge. Concluding, i wouldn't put it in a mix but it's going and staying in my HARDCORE MP3 folder, let me know when you have a final draft!!! [email protected]
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Pope C XXIII
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United States
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Posted - 2008/01/03 : 21:33:41
Not liking the bass. No punch, and very little bottom end.
Sounds kind of like z3ta preset pads, IMO. Not the best sound you could go for.
Main lead sounds like another z3ta preset, and it sounds like there's way too many atmospherics and reverb/delay on everything. Sounds like shoegazecore! :D
Not the biggest fan of the vocals, or the riff.
Not sensing any build or progression. Just flat sounds in sequences, rather than a cohesive song.
Really needs a breakdown. As nice as it is to work outside of standard structure, there's a reason it's standard. If you can make a more minimal, drivingly pulsing hardcore track without a big breakdown work, go for it, but it seems like you were kind of going for that but it just didn't pan out right.
Sorry if I'm being overly critical, but there are some definite flaws I'm hearing. You're definitely on your way though, and if you work on the sound design and structure, you could have something really cool on your hands. Hope that helped!
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Djburn
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United Kingdom
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Joined: Oct, 2005
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Posted - 2008/01/06 : 13:00:34
thank you for the comments,
i dont use fruityloops i use reason and cubase somtimes, all sounds you hear i make from scratch using several synths and samples using several ways to make the sounds i want ect ect,
im still up and coming and still working very hard to produce and for about a year now i have not given up,
i do thank all comments i get because it helps me improve so thank you for comments and i will take note while i work on the production :)
i did notice about some of the bass and bottom end, as for the vocal i think i can work on it and will let you know when the production comes on further :)
with any production im always trying to do somthing new and different to make what i want in the genre i like but make it different and unuiqe :D
thank you :)
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novaboy
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Australia
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Posted - 2008/01/06 : 14:05:58
ok lemme hear.
way too little low end on bass. i dont like the kick.
pad doesnt sound really well mixed, same with the bass.
is the bass in mono? it sounds too wide.
the synth that comes in with the raw power has eq problems, too cringey, i turned down the volume cos it was too loud etc etc.
the sample as too much. too loud , just you know.
the tracks mix down is really weird, maybe it was the sound you were trying to go for. the bass sounded minimal after a while too.
the tracks structure is quite unique, but not in a good way, it needs a little bit of changings.
in my opinion this track isnt ready, but keep working on it.
:o)
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i8wd40b4u
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United States
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Posted - 2008/01/06 : 17:20:46
thats pretty good eh for your first lol, i like the bass, BC it can be changed into a better one and it would make the song so much more, it seems to far back and a major point ! leads lol you melody isnt that great with your chime key things lol, it just seems like your using loops and you need more of a buz saw lead in it and let it be reverberated and a little distortion on it would be great, u need more pads too, i like your feel to the music with your breaks u put in, just the overall verdict
make a new song, forget this one or use it in it, you know how the bass i used, keep the format this song uses its breaks and just add more of a melody with pads and leads :D good job
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Samination
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Sweden
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Posted - 2008/01/06 : 18:06:46
actually, this isn't his first track. He's releases track for 2 years now, not that they where much either
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i8wd40b4u
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Posted - 2008/01/06 : 21:04:16
oh well its still nice lol, idk
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