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usamablackbelt
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United States
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Joined: Feb, 2008
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 Posted - 2008/02/18 : 03:12:20
Yes, yes, I'm new here. :-D
I just wanted to know if you guys could listen to a track for me and tell me what you think of it.
http://www.ilike.com/artist/Vert+Force
There's the link. The song name is "Courtesy". If want, listen to the other stuff, too! I do lots of different genres (gabber, trance, DnB, IDM, ambient, HHC). But yeah, if you guys could, could you tell me what you think? :-D
Thanks.
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Shades
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United Kingdom
1,189 posts
Joined: Dec, 2006
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Posted - 2008/02/21 : 00:16:49
P.L.U.R............
peace, love, unity, respect.......
i prefer 'Party Like U'r Retarded' lol
listening as i type.....nice crisp sound you got going on, think your first lead is way too quiet, sounds very old school mate nice one, then the second one is too loud (covers ears)
nice break beats, bass at the end needs to be present all the way through imo & think you've over done the claps a little lol sorry bud blame my fingers......
oh endddddddddd....
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Mystify
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Australia
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Joined: Jan, 2006
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Posted - 2008/02/24 : 20:41:13
The song itself is coming along quite well, however, SCRAP THE VOX!!11!1 XD
As the lead comes in, it is much too quiet in comparison to everything else that is happening, and, going by my ears it is slightly out of time.
Use a different kick sample! I'm going to assume you were going to get around to changing that, as the one you're currently using is the default kick drum loaded into FL Studio.
I have no idea what was happening half way through, when everything slowly faded out, some more vocals came in, and everything picked up again. You probably should bring some elements to an abrupt halt, then fade out the lead, or something. And once again, SCRAP TEH VOXZ1!11
When the ride comes in, it's a little ear shattering, tone it down a bit! As the ride ends, so does everything else, you probably should've dropped a few elements at 4 bar intervals rather than everything at once. That's just what I'd do anyway..
Other than that, the song sounds great, the actual music itself is brilliant, and it sounds as though you have much creativity and skill. Just work on the technical side of things and you'll be getting along fine!
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usamablackbelt
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United States
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Joined: Feb, 2008
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Posted - 2008/02/26 : 03:25:42
Thanks for listening, guys! :-D
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