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John89
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 Posted - 2008/03/23 : 16:02:23
howdy do. New track by myself i've still to mix it down the best i can. but want peoples opinions on the track first. it is mixed down to the point everything is clear though. please give me feedback on ehst you think. cheers :)
Ps everytime i try to introduce myself in the intro thread the page closes on me :S
http://www2.speedyshare.com/data/308274412/9927189/19465212/Blue%20Sky%20Day.mp3
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djbuzz1021
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 Posted - 2008/03/23 : 17:19:00
Welcome new member to the forum.
Just out of interest what did you use to make this track? was it reason or Fruity.??
Track is well constructed. Could do with the vocal being a bit louder tho, tune kind of drowns it out a bit, Nice bass line and good kick and tune seems to work well with the vocal, all in all nice track, in the middle where it builds up before it drops back in that could be stretched out a bit more make the build up longer it would sound better.
But i must say for your first track your defo heading in the right direction.
Just try work a bit more with it and you will be spot on.
Cheers
Happy Mixing
Buzz
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John89
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Posted - 2008/03/23 : 17:43:03
Cheers mate it was made with fruity.
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But i must say for your first track your defo heading in the right direction
This isn't my first ever made track if thats what you mean ? but cheers for your feedback man ;)
The main reason the vocal isnt really that loud is cos its sampled from another tune with a quiet pad in the background. But my editing is poor so i made it just so its clear.
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Mortis
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Posted - 2008/03/23 : 18:32:25
Sounds ok. I'd like to know what you've used to get that lead & also the bass. I've been having a tough time trying to get a good hardcore bass sound 
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John89
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Posted - 2008/03/23 : 19:00:37
2 x fruity 3osc
vanguard lead
then just fiddle about
oh and make sure you layer your bass at C4 & C3 in the piano roll.
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coopshire
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Posted - 2008/03/23 : 19:05:15
Ya this is pretty good
some things dont like about it but nothing is perfect (intro) (1:08)
its really good
keep comin out with stuff like this
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John89
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Posted - 2008/03/23 : 19:11:22
Thank you ;)
I take it you mean the pads ? i wasnt keen either on the pads but hey haha
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djbuzz1021
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Posted - 2008/03/24 : 01:20:49
I think i have the pella of blue sky day here if u would like me to upload it???
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Sunchipz
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Posted - 2008/03/24 : 09:00:50
Ok
Kick sounded like it was clipping or something.
Nice punchy snares
Nice bass, could be thicker
Synth lead could be phatter, more layers, and i think it would sound better more detuned..
Start of break down didnt really enter well (not toooo much flow)
I think the vocals could be louder and could have a boost.. i think less cut off on the delay too
i think the bass should have 4 notes per bar, but maybe thats personally preference. And it sounded like one note was off key.
But overall, its a good shot!
Thanks,
James
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