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djbuzz1021
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 Posted - 2008/04/13 : 18:35:22
Looking for some advice or thoughts on some ideas for basslines for this track im working on? here it is so far
http://www.speedyshare.com/466671600.html
Twisted & On Fire
EDIT - new version down the page :)
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 Posted - 2008/04/14 : 22:06:08
any feedback ?
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Posted - 2008/04/14 : 22:15:09
ok, listening now.....
Seems pretty decent, what sequencer do you use?
The main sample that is the lead at like 1min 40 is quality, i love that sound, it builds up really well with the vocals, i like how it dies down around 2 min 20 then livens back up into your main beat. The main beat is good, really luv the tune, just seems a little empty, not sure if you need more percussion in there to beef it up, although i am no expert, there are alot of talented producers on this site who could give you better feedback.
Its all good though to me, i like what you have done with the vocals, works well. You will have to give me feedback on mine in a couple days when i post the latest clip :p
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djbuzz1021
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 Posted - 2008/04/15 : 00:51:30
Thanks for that bud, I use reason 4.0 or all my tracks, The sound you like is from Combfusion Soundset Vol.1, Had some nice trance leads,
To get the build up all i did was draw in the automation building up by 15% each bar, I was not sure about the vocal, its a new technique of timestretching and granular synthesis that you can do in reason 4.0 with the NN-19 useing the Sample Start function, in 4/16 time.
Still working on this one, I was aiming for a chilled out Trance hardcore track, A euphoric sort of tune. If i get this one finished in time ill be playing it as my finial track at Twisted & Brainfire on the 26th
Thanks for the feedback and ill keep my eye out for your post bud.
Respect.
Buzz
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Posted - 2008/04/15 : 02:23:06
Ok i have worked on the kicks a bit added a deep warm bass undertone onto the track and also added a nice lead to accompany the previous one. I have also added a tempo change in the track which i think makes it build up better. all in I think i have done not too bad this time
Take a listen to the first track then this one and see if you enjoy the changes,
Thanks
Buzz
http://www.speedyshare.com/790699484.html <--- Re-worked track
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Posted - 2008/04/18 : 00:10:14
Not digging the shaker sound. It's a little too midrange heavy.
The vocal chopping is a tad annoying. It's cool when it's an addition to a breakdown or build, but it doesn't need repetition.
Use more percussion. Some claps in the intro would be really useful, and with more going on, you have more to work with when you want things to build. Right now when you build up to a drop or breakdown, it's kind of weak.
That part in the breakdown when you slow down is awesome! If you had more of a build when you're speeding up into the drop, it would make everybody on the dancefloor completely lose it.
After the first breakdown, I'd suggest changing the lead synth to a giant UK hardcore lead doing an arpeggio in 16th notes. Would add a lot of power to the drop and keep the lead from getting boring.
As far as basslines go, I think the standard off beat UK hardcore bass would work. Maybe a more pumping, hardstyle-ish bass would work well too.
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Posted - 2008/04/18 : 00:58:53
Thanks Pope for the advice, I am currently working on the build up and a new mega uk lead for when it drops back in. Also adding a few new parts to the track, only problem i am suffering from is lack of RAM :( which i am still waiting on :( So when i get some more RAM to run the software It should make for a much better production.
Cheers
Buzz
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