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FingazMc
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 Posted - 2008/04/17 : 12:49:42
Ok so i played this tune to Matt and he didnt think it was bad lol. So i thought why not post it on here to see what people think. It does need alot of work but any feedback is appreciated negative, positive or telling me im a total twat its all good lol.
Fingaz Mc - Rave Phenomenon
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vvdSSTI34cc
Dont worry theres no Mcing on it lol.
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Posted - 2008/04/20 : 23:29:20
Lol thanks for the feedback :)
Take that as "its shite" then haha
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Posted - 2008/04/21 : 13:08:20
Hey, i would have listened earlier but ive been away this weekend so im giving it a listen now, its only fair as you gave my track a listen last week. im no expert but ill do my best to give a bit of feedback even though acid house aint my thing.
ok.....i like the intro, the sample is cool and slowly builds up to the song, the music behind the sample is cool too because the sample doesnt sound empty. i like the lead that comes in at about 2mins 12, but im not sure its loud enough, it would be better if that was more powerful. The second time you use the sample (just before 3 minutes) ireally like that sort of female voice noise in the background, sounds proper wicked, id think about using that a bit more maybe (were did you get that sample?)
For the main beat, im not sure if the kick is loud enough, as i said, acid house aint my thing so that may be my 'hardcore head' talking but it may improve it with a louder kick, im not sure.
Overall though its certainly a decent track, as i said im not really into acid house, but that sample broke the song up nicely and made it interesting. Definitely keep working on this track, cause you could have a really good one.
Just now listening to your other track 'It makes me feel' Again i really like the sample of 'it makes me feel alright' etc sounds really sort of old school. The track doesnt sound.....as clean as your other one, im not sure what i mean buy that lol, i think its just the quality of the recording, like it sounds as though its on the verge of clipping or something, but i do like the beat. the lead and bass seem to go together really well and the lead is complimented with the pitch of the vocal. Decent track
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FingazMc
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Posted - 2008/04/21 : 13:42:47
Sweet mate thanks for the feedback. Yea there is alot of work still left to be done its just getting round to it.....The sample is from "Rise of the footsoldier". The female vocally bit is just on the sample its actually an old acid house tune that was playing in the club while the guy was saying all the stuff about the "Rave scene".
The "it makes me feel" tune is REALLY old, i have to admitt personally i dont like that track because that one and another one on there "All i want is you" found there way onto a friends phone and ended up going round schools and teenie boppers phones like i was some Rankin C*nt lol.
But again thank you for the feedback :)
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Posted - 2008/04/21 : 21:17:11
hey bud just had a listen, i'd call the style old skool rave m8
theres no acid in it lol, nice samples where did you find them?
liking the whole track, love my old skool
only downer is the quality ? you got a better clip ?
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FingazMc
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Posted - 2008/04/21 : 22:27:02
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Originally posted by Shades_of_Grey:
hey bud just had a listen, i'd call the style old skool rave m8
theres no acid in it lol, nice samples where did you find them?
liking the whole track, love my old skool
only downer is the quality ? you got a better clip ?
Nope sorry, since iv had broadband iv wiped my pc so all iv got is a low bitrate mp3 of it and that on youtube until i borrow my friends disc of FL again lol....
The sample's from "Rise of the footsoldier", And all the stabs were from the free sample packs @ hardsamples.com :)
And thanks for the comment lol >.<
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