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FingazMc
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 Posted - 2008/06/07 : 19:09:05
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Originally posted by Kev Willow:
listening dude......
right i cant hear it now cos of the ****in ice cream van outside
right there we go!
it sounds like to me the first verse your going to fast for the track
the pads and the piano is lovely
your vocals sound too quiet and dead dry!
its a really nice track though!
bass could do with being beefed up!
only thing i could suggest to change is turn your vocals up and sort the speed of them out on the first verse cos to me it seems as though your going to fast
nice tune though dude!
Thanx for the feedback mate 
I know what you mean about me sounding dry, tbh that was nerves i dont normally sound like that im normally alot deeper and fuller.......Im sure next time Bruxx gets me in the studio il sound better, hopefully wont need a bottle of vodka either lol
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FingazMc
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Posted - 2008/06/07 : 19:29:57
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Originally posted by narcotik:
mmm i'm not sure what all the doubt is about. This is a great track with some real passion behind it, both the MCing and the track. I think the amount of MCing is perfect. It set's the scene well & gives the track it's own personality unlike other MC's that i've heard on tracks these days. They seem to never end but I really like this track. It's focused & powerful & in no way cheesy. Good work lads!
Nice one Narcotik mate :) i think you should get the full version and put it on your radio station lol 
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Kev Willow
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Posted - 2008/06/08 : 14:04:57
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Originally posted by FingazMc:
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Originally posted by Kev Willow:
listening dude......
right i cant hear it now cos of the ****in ice cream van outside
right there we go!
it sounds like to me the first verse your going to fast for the track
the pads and the piano is lovely
your vocals sound too quiet and dead dry!
its a really nice track though!
bass could do with being beefed up!
only thing i could suggest to change is turn your vocals up and sort the speed of them out on the first verse cos to me it seems as though your going to fast
nice tune though dude!
Thanx for the feedback mate
I know what you mean about me sounding dry, tbh that was nerves i dont normally sound like that im normally alot deeper and fuller.......Im sure next time Bruxx gets me in the studio il sound better, hopefully wont need a bottle of vodka either lol
haha vodkas always good haha!
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Meathead
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Posted - 2008/06/08 : 14:35:11
nice work guys, really. loving the track, when it comes up to the build up of the 1st breakdown it gave me goosebumps :).
i like the MC'ing over the track, i like it on most tracks actually. as long as it's not like MC'ing is at a rave (Sing It, Make Some Noise and whatever other shite they come out with) i think it sounds good.
overall, really solid track. brilliant, euphoric breakdowns and energetic throughout.
and btw complexion, no offence, but your talking shit. bruxx's explained about the crowd noise and horns, and i'm actually glad Fingaz isn't singing over the track, no offence mate, but i don't think it would sound right, glad you stuck to MC'ing ;)
i'm happy for you guys this track's getting signed, i do think what Kev Willow said about your vocals maybe need turning up a bit and the bass needing beefing up a touch, but other than that IMO it is at a good standard and it's for stuff like this i wish i had CD Decks.
good luck with it.
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DJ Acidix
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Posted - 2008/06/08 : 15:24:23
i like it, all the parts where the vocals came in seemed just right, and the break beat was amazing
i think it could sound just a tad bit better without the crowd noises, but eh, thats just me =p
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FingazMc
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Posted - 2008/06/08 : 15:40:02
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Originally posted by DJ Acidix:
i like it, all the parts where the vocals came in seemed just right, and the break beat was amazing
i think it could sound just a tad bit better without the crowd noises, but eh, thats just me =p
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Originally posted by Bruxx:
The crowd noise is only there cause the track is getting released so i can't give clean copy away if you understand me :)
Thanx for the feedback acidx
And big thanks Meathead
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Meathead
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Posted - 2008/06/08 : 19:42:08
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Originally posted by FingazMc:
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Originally posted by DJ Acidix:
i like it, all the parts where the vocals came in seemed just right, and the break beat was amazing
i think it could sound just a tad bit better without the crowd noises, but eh, thats just me =p
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Originally posted by Bruxx:
The crowd noise is only there cause the track is getting released so i can't give clean copy away if you understand me :)
Thanx for the feedback acidx
lol you must be getting so pissed off with that ;)
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Bruxx
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Posted - 2008/06/09 : 00:05:39
Thanks for all the feedback guys!
Yeah i agree that the vocals sound a little dry, can easily sort it out :) thanks!
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FingazMc
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Posted - 2008/06/14 : 00:58:10
K its on YT now for people who dont want to download it lol :)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wpLafoc0BEs
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