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Complexion
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 Australia
352 posts Joined: Apr, 2008
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Posted - 2008/06/13 : 04:10:49
Hi guys 1 month down to production I've made another track coming from a person who doesn't know any music theory at all and jack shit bout production. :( I need some feedback and how I can improve it. The track is called 'Rainbows'.
NOTE: Track is not structured much yet.
CHECK IT OUT: www.myspace.com/complexiondj
Look forward to your comments and feedback! :)
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Edited by - Complexion on 2008/06/13 04:12:03 |
DJ Acidix
Average Member
  

 United States
173 posts Joined: May, 2008
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Posted - 2008/06/13 : 05:46:55
in all honesty i really love the track
theres just something about how the babe's voice fades in and out i don't like... but i can't really think of what it is right now
overall, real good job imo, but note, I have no real production experience and i dont think im too picky =P
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choonland
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 Colombia
1,100 posts Joined: Dec, 2007
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Posted - 2008/06/13 : 08:33:08
the voice needs reverb, I mean the pad make it sounds very spacy, but the girl is singing right next to your ear
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bulby_g
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 United Kingdom
7,205 posts Joined: Apr, 2004
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Posted - 2008/06/13 : 09:01:00
Will be hard to comment on the engineering side of things if you post it on myspaz. :)
Will check it out when I get a sec though.
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