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Naggy
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United States
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Joined: Feb, 2008
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 Posted - 2008/07/08 : 21:04:24
Hey everyone, I've been working on a track for a while now and I'm pretty much done with it now.
If anyone caught the last track I put up it sounded like large metal objects hitting each other, this ones a bit better...
I'm not sure yet whether to add some random quick vocal that's distorted or something or just keep it how it is.
I'm also pretty bad at naming things, I usually just look around the room for something that might inspire me, and nothing rarely does.
Criticism wanted!
http://www.mediafire.com/?tv2mdmjuy2i
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Triquatra
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United Kingdom
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Joined: Nov, 2003
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Posted - 2008/07/08 : 22:03:32
i really like it
i know thats not much help criticism wise - but just to let you know. :)
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bulby_g
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United Kingdom
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Joined: Apr, 2004
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Posted - 2008/07/09 : 19:12:19
At 02:55 there is a lot of distortion when you're filtering in the track. Maybe a Compression and/or overdrive issue... Also happens elsewhere but not as badly.
Needs some work in the EQ area. What I've said here:-
http://www.happyhardcore.com/forums/topic.asp?TOPIC_ID=40709
should help you with some of it. If you can understand my mumblings.
Nice track though mate. Quite like it. Some neat little bits and pieces in there.
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