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scottyando
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 Posted - 2009/02/02 : 22:43:04
http://rapidshare.com/files/193115795/KEEP_ON_DANCIN_.mp3.html
somethin not quite right about it. cant think what so....
feedback appreciated!
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tru bass
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Posted - 2009/02/02 : 23:10:20
that plucky string should come in untill later in the song and the stuff at the start needs leveling out..
the breakdown doesnt really have a creschendo of anykind and the bassline bit isnt in tune..
the bit after just has the same synth and again the bass is out of tune.. you need a new crash lol!!!
the vocals dont really fit in with the song as well.. the offbeat bassline is ok and the kick & percussion are O.K..
it needs alot doing to it.. basically make another song, but
stick at it!!!
i used to be at exactly the same stage as you are.
Oh btw.. i suggest you get z3ta+ and try and make some proper hardcore synths..
and id stick to the offbeat bass stab if i were you..
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scottyando
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Posted - 2009/02/02 : 23:53:40
quote:
Originally posted by tru bass:
that plucky string should come in untill later in the song and the stuff at the start needs leveling out..
the breakdown doesnt really have a creschendo of anykind and the bassline bit isnt in tune..
the bit after just has the same synth and again the bass is out of tune.. you need a new crash lol!!!
the vocals dont really fit in with the song as well.. the offbeat bassline is ok and the kick & percussion are O.K..
it needs alot doing to it.. basically make another song, but
stick at it!!!
i used to be at exactly the same stage as you are.
Oh btw.. i suggest you get z3ta+ and try and make some proper hardcore synths..
and id stick to the offbeat bass stab if i were you..
gutted! but thats the 2nd tune ive made. I thot it sounded ok compared to the last one like. I really need to get better software, using fruity loops 7 xxl but want cubase. Cant get my head around chords, notes, etc. Think i need keyboard lessons
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TypeR
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Posted - 2009/02/02 : 23:56:58
how are you supposed to write music if you don't know the basic element of writing music?
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tru bass
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Posted - 2009/02/03 : 00:02:16
quote:
Originally posted by scottyando:
quote:
Originally posted by tru bass:
that plucky string should come in untill later in the song and the stuff at the start needs leveling out..
the breakdown doesnt really have a creschendo of anykind and the bassline bit isnt in tune..
the bit after just has the same synth and again the bass is out of tune.. you need a new crash lol!!!
the vocals dont really fit in with the song as well.. the offbeat bassline is ok and the kick & percussion are O.K..
it needs alot doing to it.. basically make another song, but
stick at it!!!
i used to be at exactly the same stage as you are.
Oh btw.. i suggest you get z3ta+ and try and make some proper hardcore synths..
and id stick to the offbeat bass stab if i were you..
gutted! but thats the 2nd tune ive made. I thot it sounded ok compared to the last one like. I really need to get better software, using fruity loops 7 xxl but want cubase. Cant get my head around chords, notes, etc. Think i need keyboard lessons
you dont need keyboard lessons.. just basically continue messing about on fl.. it will take time but eventually you learn the tricks..
i use fl8 and tbh your not looking for better software.. your just looking for practice.
@typeR: dont be a winnat..
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TypeR
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Posted - 2009/02/03 : 01:58:10
what's a winnat? also, if you don't know chord structure then you'll have a bit of a hard time mating basslines with leads and such. that's easy to combat, just listen to a lot of music and try to emulate what you hear.
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Rayovac
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Posted - 2009/02/03 : 04:56:26
"Gutted"? "Winnat"? *confusion*
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Originally posted by tru bass:
you dont need keyboard lessons.. just basically continue messing about on fl.. it will take time but eventually you learn the tricks..
While being able to successfully play a keyboard isn't necessary, it helps. 
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