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acidfluxxbass
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 Posted - 2009/02/07 : 12:26:14
Hey people.
Here's a fun little track from myself and Pharynx (Redwingz on here) released free sponsored by http://www.nsrrecords.co.uk/
Any feedback or comments are entirely welcome, Thanks!
Link: http://www.4shared.com/file/84891144/4d6c5180/Illuminii.html
Check out more at http://www.nsrrecords.co.uk/
Enjoy!
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Edited by - acidfluxxbass on 2009/02/09 13:31:04 |
Fishy
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Posted - 2009/02/07 : 13:25:07
Coud become good if u guys work on it, now i think it sounds like it lacks of engery and is abit plain.. just an honest opinion
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Wilky
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Posted - 2009/02/07 : 14:38:19
Not heard it yet. NSR is ment tn be a record label right? not very proffesional using 4shared as you file hosting. buy some u stingy gits
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Mortis
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Posted - 2009/02/07 : 14:45:02
quote:
Originally posted by Fishy:
Coud become good if u guys work on it, now i think it sounds like it lacks of engery and is abit plain.. just an honest opinion
What he said.
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choonland
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Posted - 2009/02/07 : 15:29:20
well you guys definitely have improved, but I think it is still not up to standard, at least not for a label release.
I think what makes it sound plain is the same constant harmony the entire song
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Meathead
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Posted - 2009/02/07 : 16:04:56
If you want my honest opinion, it shouldnt be released, free or at all tbh. Sorry guys its just not a very professional production. Fair play for giving it a go, but you both need to practise alot more before releasing material. If you were to release this on NSR it would give out the wrong kind of message about what NSR is about. Keep it, work on it, dont dillute the quality of the tracks on the label.
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Dain-Ja
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Posted - 2009/02/07 : 16:10:58
I'm not having a go, I just wanna help out with helpful criticism :)
I can't hear a bassline on my laptop speakers. You need bass to get driving energy, if I can't hear it then something is wrong.
The snare roll is way too loud
The sounds are thin. Either use different patches for the melodies or layer something.
Hope that helps...
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acidfluxxbass
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Posted - 2009/02/07 : 21:11:55
quote:
Originally posted by Wilky:
buy some u stingy gits
what the hells wrong with you? no appreciation even though u get a free track
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and just so you all know, the track is a free release. we're moving on into some proper stuff next week. this was a fun little tune we put together for the hell of it.
Since i was the one who's posting, yes I am using 4shared. It's not proffessional, perhaps, but who gives a crap, you just got a free tune from us ;)
Thanks for the feedback
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Project-Industrial
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Posted - 2009/02/08 : 00:49:17
wudnt say i like it that much.. but its not bad either :) its a free track so dont be harsh wif the comments ppl :) accept it or leave it ;) like the melody tbh.. :)
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acidfluxxbass
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Posted - 2009/02/08 : 01:34:23
thanks bb
incase anyones interested, i updated the file. its got a more noticable bassline, more bass and a lowered snare, thanks to your comments. its not world class, but its a fun cheesy track that i enjoyed making with pharynx
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Deverse
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Posted - 2009/02/08 : 04:19:27
Not to sound bad.
But the tune is very bad, the kick is very weak, the bassline has no feel to it, needs more going on, the track itself just sounds really empty. Did you even think of mastering this tune before giving it out as a freebie? Maybe you guys are not ready to give out a free track by yourselves yet since it's not up to standard. :S
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Bumbfuckins
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Posted - 2009/02/08 : 04:25:46
sorry m8 but its not that good
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Ionosphere
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Posted - 2009/02/08 : 17:46:35
Sorry lads but it still needs some more work.
I had a bit of spare time on my hands
and couldn't resist the temptation....
http://www.ionosphere.co.uk/AUDIO/Pharynx&Fluxx-illuminii.mp3
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Deverse
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Posted - 2009/02/09 : 05:28:48
quote:
Originally posted by Ionosphere:
Sorry lads but it still needs some more work.
I had a bit of spare time on my hands
and couldn't resist the temptation....
http://www.ionosphere.co.uk/AUDIO/Pharynx&Fluxx-illuminii.mp3
Errr? What you do to it? LOL
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Leto
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Posted - 2009/02/09 : 08:31:25
I like the Ionosphere version!! :D
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redwingz
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Posted - 2009/02/09 : 10:20:30
Wow, this tune has had more feedback than NSR's established releases get.
This track is not an NSR release (it does not have a catalogue number) The track is just 'sponsered' by NSR. I agree that the track is not good enough for a label release. We just made the track basically to get a bit of feedback and to help us to improve. There are a lot of good producers on this site who can give good feedback.
We wanted to give the track away for free just to let people have a listen. Our next track will be a big improvement and will be regulated closer (I will send it out to a few 'respected' producers first to ask for their opinion before it even sees the light of day.
I appreciate that people have listened to the track, but please understand that it is not an official NSR release. NSR's new batch is out today.
Ionosphere - haha you make me laugh, you are too busy to be wasting your time on this track lol, get some proper work done :p
So anyway guys, I appreciate the feedback, but all I can say is 'This was a first attempt at a track. The next one will be much better ;)
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