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ozmium
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okay just give it a listen i brought somthing in after every 8 bars and i put filters and loops it has a good melody

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Link?

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Would definitely listen if there was a link



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lol wow XD okay got to stop the drugs lol heres the link



http://www.4shared.com/file/121061935/44a6b69c/Rave_paradice.html

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Posted - 2009/07/28 :  19:21:02  Show profile  Send a private message  Visit ozmium's homepage
BUMP

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hi there..
not the most keen on that to be honest..
the sounds im not into.. the melody aint that catchy/musical

not sure what happens at 2:12 but it goes very quiet when u bring in that b-line..
nice idea.. but needs to be a cleaner sweep down..

love the kick drum though.. nice and reverby and BIG
so good skills.

keep it up

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  • The mastering could be better i.e. at the beginning when you run that EQ effect on the synth. At one point it also gets fairly quiet.

  • You have too much of the same synth going on. If you ask me they're clashing.

  • There's no lower-end bass anywhere in the song. You also have the off-beat synth but there's no bass to go with it.

  • It's too repetitive. To be honest it seems to be either just the kick with percussion, or the kick w/ percussion and synths. The melody is a bit repetitive too.

  • Also, to get some caviling in, it's a bit short, and it should be paradise.



These are just my opinions though... I'm no expert either... so ignore them if you want.

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well its better, but i could just write the same advice as i have done for your other tracks



ps. mind if i remix a midi of this? :P

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quote:
Originally posted by acidfluxxbass:
ps. mind if i remix a midi of this? :P


I'd be interested in checking out the midi too.

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quote:
Originally posted by Rayovac:
  • The mastering could be better i.e. at the beginning when you run that EQ effect on the synth. At one point it also gets fairly quiet.

  • You have too much of the same synth going on. If you ask me they're clashing.

  • There's no lower-end bass anywhere in the song. You also have the off-beat synth but there's no bass to go with it.

  • It's too repetitive. To be honest it seems to be either just the kick with percussion, or the kick w/ percussion and synths. The melody is a bit repetitive too.

  • Also, to get some caviling in, it's a bit short, and it should be paradise.



These are just my opinions though... I'm no expert either... so ignore them if you want.


Spot on imo.

Also, no real structure; no intro, outro and at 0:51 the track comes in out of nowhere. Random FX, such as the filter at 1:40, thrown in in odd places, same goes for the vocal samples just seemingly scattered about.

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Originally posted by ozmium:
lol wow XD okay got to stop the drugs lol heres the link


Yes, yes you do. You don't by any chance produce under the influence do you?

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nah i dont produce under the influence XD

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heres the flp i dident make it a zip cuz i forgot and it was too late to go back so heres the flp with the midi


http://www.4shared.com/file/121328128/2303313c/Rave_paradice.html


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Posted - 2009/07/28 :  21:02:17  Show profile  Send a private message  Visit ozmium's homepage
ps. have fun!

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I had a little play around with this track last night and got some interesting results. It's not mixed down or mastered or even eq'd in anyway. It's just a small clip: http://www21.zippyshare.com/v/44492161/file.html

**Edit**

A bit more I've just done: http://www8.zippyshare.com/v/99512660/file.html

Again ignore the poor sounds and lack of build-ups etc.

I might just finish this track.

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Edited by - Mortis on 2009/07/29 15:52:26
acidfluxxbass
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quote:
Originally posted by Mortis:
I had a little play around with this track last night and got some interesting results. It's not mixed down or mastered or even eq'd in anyway. It's just a small clip: http://www21.zippyshare.com/v/44492161/file.html


damn, Mortis! haha i was thinking along those lines!

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Posted - 2009/07/29 :  18:52:36  Show profile  Send a private message  Visit ozmium's homepage
quote:
Originally posted by Mortis:
I had a little play around with this track last night and got some interesting results. It's not mixed down or mastered or even eq'd in anyway. It's just a small clip: http://www21.zippyshare.com/v/44492161/file.html

**Edit**

A bit more I've just done: http://www8.zippyshare.com/v/99512660/file.html

Again ignore the poor sounds and lack of build-ups etc.

I might just finish this track.




holy crap i wish i was that good at making tunes XD

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