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Quicksilver
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 Posted - 2012/05/02 : 22:46:40
Yo!
I have been producing for about two years but I so very, very rarely get any feedback or such so I'm begging for some feedback at the moment. I need to know what I'm doing wrong, and what I'm doing right. Please don't just restrain yourself to this one track but this one track I'd love to improve.
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Audio Warfare
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Posted - 2012/05/02 : 23:25:41
Nice, I love that breakdown. 8) Only thing I wasn't really sold on was that acid sound, don't really like the sound used. I'd love to remix this if you're OK with that? Give me a shout!
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Quicksilver
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Posted - 2012/05/02 : 23:53:40
Cheers man! :D Any tips on how the acid sound can be improved? ;)
Btw send me a pm with what you need to remix it and I'll fix it.
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Tastetherainobw
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Posted - 2012/05/03 : 12:14:55
It could of been a little faster. But maybe it just hasnt been pitched up.
Im also kind of used to like 180 bpm freeform. Just food for thought.
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Warnman
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Posted - 2012/05/03 : 20:12:58
I agree with Audio Warefare. The weakness of the track are the acid sounds.
The beat seems to be fine, but the track feels is a little bit empty. You might should try using some more effects like lasers, flashs, etc.
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Shades
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Posted - 2012/05/03 : 23:00:37
quote:
Originally posted by Warnman:
I agree with Audio Warefare. The weakness of the track are the acid sounds.
The beat seems to be fine, but the track feels is a little bit empty. You might should try using some more effects like lasers, flashs, etc.
yeah it seems empty because the acid is so prominent, less is more, dont over do the acid, the acid in the breakdown over shadows the drop & makes it sound empty when it all kicks off.....
i love the movement in the acid, be that from cutoff automation or filter work, so try not to change that, but, i do think the acid needs more melodic changes & maybe more distortion....
imho of course 
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Triquatra
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Posted - 2012/05/03 : 23:07:51
can't believe I missed this one mate, commented!
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Quicksilver
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Posted - 2012/05/04 : 22:40:45
Love the feedback guys, I thank you tons!
I'm gonna work on all things brought up here and see if I can improve it. :)
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