http://wwwacidplanetcom/artistaspPID=257850T=137718 my 1st ever choon so tell me wat ya thing aint the best like but im really new 2 this so eh tell me wat i c

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Dave Murray
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Posted - 2003/04/05 : 01:38:51

http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?PID=257850&T=137718 - my 1st ever choon, so tell me wat ya thing aint the best like, but im really new 2 this, so eh tell me, wat i could do 2 make it better ok thanx! Oh and i'd like 2 thank Simon and Hard2get 4 the help u know who u r

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Posted - 2003/04/05 : 03:24:25

im gonna have a listen to it now

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Posted - 2003/04/05 : 03:27:04

Well not my style of music at all really so i cant comment on what i think of the tunage.

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tommo
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Posted - 2003/04/05 : 04:43:36

Not bad,we'll I mean it's not unlistenable.

Kinda gabba edge to it, which I like.

Im just a bassline addict
Im just a hardcore addict
Im just a dancefloor manic
Why o why cant you just accept it.

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Simon
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Posted - 2003/04/05 : 04:53:40

I'll listen to it mate and give a review on the site

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It'll be good I'm sure!!!!!!!

Also no need to thank me buddy am always willing to help

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Weasel
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Posted - 2003/04/05 : 08:51:06

Its ok. It doesnt really make much sence as a song, to many things going on, you should keep parts of the song that are common to each other, some of the bits aint even layered over each other but still a ok a atempt, you should have tryed to make a mellody or something, because your song doesnt really have that its really just a drum beat and some hats, you should have maybe put your hats off beat of the drums, would have made the song have some energy and speed. other than that its a ok first atempt, good to see you getting around the program quite well.

I don’t mean to be rude, it just come naturally

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tommo
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Posted - 2003/04/05 : 09:33:09

What program did you use frooty loops,cubasis?

Im just a bassline addict
Im just a hardcore addict
Im just a dancefloor manic
Why o why cant you just accept it.

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Simon
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Posted - 2003/04/05 : 09:40:24

He used Fruity Loops not Cubase

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still one for the future me thinks :-)

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