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KinetiX NRG
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 United Kingdom
11 posts Joined: May, 2003
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Posted - 2003/05/21 : 14:00:50
i wrote this this after noon. Id appreciate any feedback uze lot can giv.
Wen iam on the mike i duel to the death/ Qiuck as lightnin dont stop to catch my breath/ Iam slick as ice, so fast i haf ta spit it out twice/ Mc Jay dnt stop, dnt sing, dnt sway/ kikin out lyrics desighned to make you stay/ so get ready for the muther ****in uproar, iam the crowned king of hardcore/ i cum wit words that thrill, u aint got no time to chill, u aint kikin back, relaxin, u aint maxin till i say, iam mc jay here to stay!
Hardcore To Tha Bone
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Dave Murray
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 United Kingdom
3,675 posts Joined: Jan, 2003
136 hardcore releases
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Posted - 2003/05/21 : 14:30:49
Pretty good mate.
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Slynx
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 Australia
217 posts Joined: Apr, 2003
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Posted - 2003/05/21 : 16:45:54
quote: Originally posted by Daveo:
Pretty good mate.
*This is what makes me.....This is what i am!*
NICE ONE BRUV! i like the flow of it. I got some of my own here but ill get back to ya.
Just Accept It, I'm a raver not a crazy drug addict!
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Slynx
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 Australia
217 posts Joined: Apr, 2003
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Posted - 2003/05/21 : 16:47:50
By the way, if anyone is thinking that i was trying to sell MC Storms lyrics as my own, im not... it just happens to be my signiture. haha
Just Accept It, I'm a raver not a crazy drug addict!
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virus
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 Canada
4,346 posts Joined: May, 2001
716 hardcore releases
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Posted - 2003/05/21 : 19:03:38
Typing lyrics doesnt really show off your talent as an MC though..
How you present these lyrics is just as important as what you are saying..
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mcjutt
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 United Kingdom
564 posts Joined: Jul, 2002
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Posted - 2003/05/22 : 07:35:19
agreed virus plus mcing isnt always about the lyrics thats a small part of it
since 1999 ive been on special quest
i set out to do a job and to be the best
since picking up the mic i gotta rip it up
u can jump on the mic but theres no1 like the jutt
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DJ STYLUS
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 United Kingdom
1,661 posts Joined: Aug, 2001
21 hardcore releases
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Posted - 2003/05/22 : 07:39:24
I DONT HAVE TO SAY ANYTHING JUST.........
quote: How you present these lyrics is just as important as what you are saying
quote: Just Accept It, I'm a raver not a crazy drug addict!
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