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DjNova
New Member
Australia
21 posts
Joined: Mar, 2003
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 Posted - 2003/06/14 : 17:38:07
yo...
this is my 1st happyhardcore/trancecore tune take a look if you have time and tell me what you think thanks....
http://www.geocities.com/d1_ha/splixfullofemotion2.mp3
have fun
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GregE
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Australia
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 Posted - 2003/06/14 : 18:32:51
yeah i would....but link dont work :(
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Kaffine
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United States
474 posts
Joined: Jun, 2002
91 hardcore releases
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Posted - 2003/06/14 : 19:21:50
Well, I heard it, and I'm not quite sure what to say.
It could be quite promising but in all honesty, the mastering of the track was quite off and it seemed a muddy mess. I can't make out many instrument sounds at all. A few tips:
Tone down the volume of the drums. A LOT. They're drowning out the rest of your track! The lead sounds totally nasty but it's dulled by the kick and loses the effect! (It's got that scott brown/breeze & styles sound to it.)
Be sure to EQ everything! I think the lead would benefit from some boosts in the mid ranges.
If you can, tighten up that bassline (compress it, possibly?) It degrades in to a rumbling roar noise that simply detracts from the track on both the sets of speakers I gave the track a listen to on.
I hope that helps. If you can upload a better mastered version, I'd be happy to listen! It's sounding great!
-dj h3o
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DjNova
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Australia
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Posted - 2003/06/14 : 19:51:49
[quote]Originally posted by Kaffine:
Be sure to EQ everything! I think the lead would benefit from some boosts in the mid ranges.
If you can, tighten up that bassline (compress it, possibly?) It degrades in to a rumbling roar noise that simply detracts from the track on both the sets of speakers I gave the track a listen to on.
-dj h3o
what do u mean i don under stand ur tips? lil help
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Kaffine
Senior Member
United States
474 posts
Joined: Jun, 2002
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Posted - 2003/06/16 : 05:20:45
quote:
Originally posted by Kaffine:
Tone down the volume of the drums. A LOT. They're drowning out the rest of your track! The lead sounds totally nasty but it's dulled by the kick and loses the effect! (It's got that scott brown/breeze & styles sound to it.)
I'm guessing you made this in fruityloops? If you're on FLStudio 4.0 try sending them all to their own FX channel and then dragging down the volume slider. Otherwise, just tweak each drum's individual volume control until they're on equal volume with everything else.
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Be sure to EQ everything! I think the lead would benefit from some boosts in the mid ranges.
Run all the elements of your track through an equalizer, and boost the frequencies that count for each timbre, and drop the ones that don't. For example, your lead is primarily in the mids so boost the mids a tiny bit, as well as the VERY bottom end and maybe the very top end (for a more full, driving sound.) Again, this has to be done to YOUR taste. I can't really tell you what to do here.
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If you can, tighten up that bassline (compress it, possibly?) It degrades in to a rumbling roar noise that simply detracts from the track on both the sets of speakers I gave the track a listen to on.
Again, decrease the volume. Maybe set the envelope on the bassline a bit closer so that each note is a bit more comprehensible and run it through a compressor (in fruity loops, just put the bassline on its own FX channel and give it the 'fruity compressor' plugin. Tweak the settings to fit. :)
Hope that helps. If you want me to master it for you I'd be glad to do the job, you'd have to send me the project file though and that's a matter of faith. :P
I hope that helps. If you can upload a better mastered version, I'd be happy to listen! It's sounding great!
-dj h3o
All I know is that to me, you look like you're lots of fun, open up your loving arms - watch out here I come!
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-dj h3o
All I know is that to me, you look like you're lots of fun, open up your loving arms - watch out here I come!
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Xplosiv
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United Kingdom
12 posts
Joined: Jun, 2003
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Posted - 2003/06/16 : 07:51:56
Hi to all of U
I have just strted to make hardcore music, and I would like u boys to
listen to my tracks and let me know what u think.
This will take u there and then just click on play.
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/newdimentionmusic.htm
PS. I only stared making music a few weeks ago and any advise will be much
appeciated.
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whispering
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Finland
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Joined: Nov, 2002
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Posted - 2003/06/16 : 11:09:15
quote:
Originally posted by Xplosiv:
Hi to all of U
I have just strted to make hardcore music, and I would like u boys to
listen to my tracks and let me know what u think.
squeeze the track to last 4-5 min and ad a "lead sound"...
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Xplosiv
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United Kingdom
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Posted - 2003/06/16 : 12:23:20
Wispering.
Making the track 5 mins long is the easy part. But by "lead sound"
do u mean, 1 main tune or melodie throughout the track.
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