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Exhile
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 Posted - 2003/11/03 : 17:38:46
Right this is my first ever attempt at a tune and i know it needs a lot of work but any feedback would be appreciated
http://www.mixtapehost.com/~djhoekzema/untitleddll01.mp3
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silver
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Posted - 2003/11/03 : 22:05:13
If this is your first tune it's not so bad, watch your mixing levels and your crash symbol sounds a little flat... Other than that keep working on it.
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Sean Apollo
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Posted - 2003/11/03 : 22:17:11
not bad at all dude, crash's sound a lil ehh... maybe you could get them more crisp? other then that sounds great keep going!
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Hard2Get
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Posted - 2003/11/03 : 22:18:39
The crash is fine, it's just a few semitones too low :) It would work ok in slower music :)
Like Silver said, for a first tune it really is quite good :)
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Exhile
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Posted - 2003/11/04 : 03:25:58
Cheers for the feedback guys and thanks to mat the help on this one too :)
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Seany
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Posted - 2003/11/04 : 05:20:31
yeah its defo good for a first track  ,if that was your first think of how good you could be if you keep doing it ,gl with producing m8
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Underloop
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Posted - 2003/11/04 : 05:54:01
Nice work mate.... sounds better without that other sample in it, and I like that arpeggio you have going on in it.... sounds better being brought more to the front of the mix.
As has already been said, it is extremely good for a first tune (I remember my first attempts!! lol), and I also know how quickly you put this together.... another plus! There could be good things ahead for you mate, keep at it!
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Simon
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Posted - 2003/11/04 : 06:57:26
It's definatly good for a first effort, you just need to keep it up and then is 6 months or so you could be getting a lot futher....It's all about having the patience and determination to just keep working at it  .
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raverdave
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Posted - 2003/11/04 : 14:32:39
The link don't seem to be working for me (file not found-whats happening?). And i was all ready to tear your tune to pieces..
Jokin dude, its probably excellent 
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Exhile
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Posted - 2003/11/04 : 14:49:04
lol i took it of mate
Right heres a link for an updated and probably final version of this tune as i have now started on my second tune.
http://www.mixtapehost.com/~djhoekzema/Waves_of_Desire1.mp3
Hope you enjoy and let me know what ya think.
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Comet
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Posted - 2003/11/04 : 16:21:30
Woah, you do realise that Kevin Energy made a tune called Waves of Desire.
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Y Don't U get off your arse and get these tracks out instead...
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raverdave
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Posted - 2003/11/04 : 16:48:46
Hey its good dude! maybe you could do a little bit more in the break, change it or let it build up again a little slower or maybe speed the whole thing up just a touch.. but I like it, what program did you use?
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Exhile
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Posted - 2003/11/04 : 17:19:30
I used cubase actually. I didnt realise energy had a tune named like that. In that case i will have to rename it waves of passion :)
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Reese
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Posted - 2003/11/12 : 20:25:19
could use more percussion.. maybe put some delay and reverb on the cymbals
the lead is very cheeky, 97ish.. that might be what you're going for tho.. so in that case it's ok.
i agree w/ what others are saying.. try to vary up the synth a bit.. different note patterns, filters, etc etc
not bad for a first tune.. not bad at all!
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the_king
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Posted - 2003/11/13 : 05:39:02
it oke
hey Frank maybe you can come to the forum of Mental Theo and ask what does guy`s think about it ther are alot of guy`show are also making music
http://www.mentaltheo.nl/forum/
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