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eddiewould
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 Posted - 2004/07/13 : 09:12:27
Hey guys this is my second choon :) Created using Reason like the last one.
The sound changed a bit since the last one (less of the Amiga500 sound, Thanks Nathan :D ) but somehow some distortion / clipping has found its way in.. gotta iron that out.
Just looking for overall feedback, and wondering should I leave the track as it is (cuts off abruptly) or keep going with it to make it a bit longer?
Cheers
Eddie
Download: http://homepages.paradise.net.nz/rossstan/mp3s/latest.mp3
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Underloop
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Posted - 2004/07/13 : 10:51:17
Sounds good..... all the elements are there. The production/mix down could do with a bit of work, the blanace between all the different elements spounds a bit out, and the lead synth sounds a bit too far back in the mix for MY preferences (although I am sure others will disagree)
Also, it needs to be longer!!!! 
Overall though, it sounds pretty good.... nice riffage!
Matthew aka DJ Underloop
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The Deviant
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Posted - 2004/07/13 : 11:08:03
The opening riff is wicked, but it should be saved intil the break down. You need to do a proper intro and then build into that riff. And some effects some percussion and extend the sections, the riff only just gets going and then changes. This could be a good tune a bit work. And im not a fan of that kick drum, I think there best left for bouncy techno.
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hyperdance
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 Posted - 2004/07/13 : 16:20:28
yea!! kickin
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eddiewould
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Posted - 2004/07/13 : 21:38:24
Underloop, when you say the lead synth sounds too far back in the mix... do you just mean volume? or is there more to it than that?
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NathanD
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Posted - 2004/07/14 : 02:59:42
hi mate! is that a thanks to me?
this tune is good too! ur tunes have a lot of potential! once u get all ur production skills together ul get far! i have faith! keep it up!
i will try and finish the last track oneday! i get bored tho lol, im lazzzzy!
see ya around!
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eddiewould
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Posted - 2004/07/14 : 03:58:52
yeah dude thats a shout out to you for your primo lead synth sound!
which i somehow unfortunately F@#$ed up, and thats why it sounds nasty and distorted in this mix.
I'm using it for my next choon too however! Mwaahahahaa :D
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DjTriatomic
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Posted - 2004/07/14 : 04:53:04
pretty good
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