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bulby_g
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 Posted - 2005/05/31 : 22:57:27
http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?PID=560965&t=959
Another new tune i've been workin on this time much harder freeform I know the bassline badly needs some variety to it but just thought post this anyway to see if anyone had any suggestions.
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Posted - 2005/05/31 : 23:48:52
bulby g you are improving by miles seriously.
now i think theres a tad too much reverb on the sounds which givs the impression of a clash in places have a fiddle with tht.
id suggest having a look at the panning(maybe)on the riffs.
yer the bassline needs to be sorted a bit and maybe as a suggestion look at a saw type bassline but thts entirely upto you
all in all tho i think anyone who knows your wrk will agree on how much more proffessional your sound is getting its just the little things now tht you need to revise well done mate im liking the sound: )
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bulby_g
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Posted - 2005/06/01 : 00:00:16
Cheers m8 ;) I think it sounds like ita pannin because there is a lot of flange on the melody's thats if by pannin you mean it's driftin to much from left to right? Will fiddle around with the reverb a bit and look at the bassline and let ya know when i've done something.
Anyone else gonna comment?
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Posted - 2005/06/01 : 15:21:56
goood track mate:P
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Posted - 2005/06/01 : 16:17:44
great track! hope to hear when its finished
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bulby_g
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Posted - 2005/06/01 : 19:58:11
Cheers guys will be posting the finished track on this thread when its done.
Anyone else?
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Edited by - bulby_g on 2005/06/01 20:22:44 |
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Posted - 2005/06/01 : 20:34:10
not bad at all my friend. i would suggest introducing another synth also. and maybe get a new bassline. you can also try to compress some of the synths.
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bulby_g
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Posted - 2005/06/01 : 22:59:14
Cheers icex I have completely stripped out the bassline and redone it I think it's sounding much better than it was. Have also tweaked all the percussion a little and a few other bits and pieces and uploaded it so people can listen to the newer version.
Still need to tweak the synths and was thinking an acid line in the background will fill it out a little but havn't managed a decent one yet so if anyone has any tips on em please post! I'm maybe gonna go for a breakbeat section after the gabba break too
Anyone else gonna have a listen? all links will go straight to the updated version.
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Posted - 2005/06/02 : 00:15:16
yeah nice one alot more of an improvement on the previous sounds alot tidier.
i like the tune alot its my sorta thing deffinately one of your best.
bassline sounds well better.
as you say jus tidy a lil on the synths and review the track and you will have a wicked piece of music there i love it :)
1 thing on the synths iid look at is the flange effect maybe clean tht a tad more but yer i cannot wait for the complete version its wicked upto now.
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Posted - 2005/06/02 : 11:07:19
Cheers will definately be sortin the flange out before the final version.
Anyone else have any comments or advice?
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Edited by - bulby_g on 2005/06/02 14:30:42 |
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Posted - 2005/06/02 : 14:42:09
i'm liking it! sounds well thought out! t'is nice!
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Posted - 2005/06/02 : 17:34:56
Cheers Nathan D :)
Updated version up now its had a bit of an overhaul still need to do one last edit but its pretty much done just gotta get all the sounds right now
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Edited by - bulby_g on 2005/06/02 17:53:57 |
steve O
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Posted - 2005/06/02 : 17:57:36
It's an excellent track, but I think the bassline and the beat should be a little rougher and harder throughout, give it more of a 'whoompf'!. Good luck with the final edit, coz that is one phat track (P-H fat lol!).
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Posted - 2005/06/02 : 18:15:24
^^^^ cheers will see what i can do on the bass and kick for the final edit
anyone else got any advice for the final edit?
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Edited by - bulby_g on 2005/06/02 18:25:25 |
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Posted - 2005/06/02 : 18:27:28
good tune!
keep going!
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The Deviant
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Posted - 2005/06/02 : 18:29:20
Love the main riff. You could just drop the bassline alltogether, sounds good with just a bouncy kick.
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