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bulby_g
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 Posted - 2005/06/28 : 01:04:25
http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?pid=578688&T=3681
New freeform tune please feel free to listen and leave comments and/or advice. It does have a couple of dodgy bits where it changes too suddenly I am aware of them and am currently looking for a way to smooth them out but thought i'd post the track so far to get a bit of feedback.
(All feedback welcome good or bad.)
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Edited by - bulby_g on 2005/06/28 14:53:34 |
icex
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Posted - 2005/06/28 : 04:44:46
the vox sound cool , the intro sounds cool. the breakdown sounds good and so does the the beats that follow it.
the clap needs to be changed, i also believe that in the first beat part the bass(1:10) changes 2 much. i think u should get rid of that first 4x4 beat part and add the after breakdown beats there instead. i needs to be much longer before it goes into breakdown i believe. and the breakdown silence is something that i never liked, i havent heard it done rite many times. its risky.
the main problem with the song is that the structure is all messed up. the track sounds good tho and many sounds are there but i feel that everything i placed all over the place.
i also think that u should make a main lead because u dont have one. the track is good tho. if u need help to arrange it or would like help making a main lead lemme know im always down to help.
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Posted - 2005/06/28 : 10:30:45
sounds sweet bulby but like icex said the claps do need to be changed but apart from that i think its really sweet.
chill out and take some hash coz excy's out 2get ****in mashed!!
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bulby_g
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Posted - 2005/06/28 : 14:14:18
Cheers guys I'll sort the clap out and look at the bass where it goes up for 4 (I assume thats the bit you mean icex). I know the arrangement needs alot of work i'm currently trying to sort that and im planning to have something at the start of the breakdown to kill the silence but dont know what yet.
Icex if your up for lending a hand with a lead and arrangement I would be grateful yeah im always happy to get a bit of help from someone else.
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Edited by - bulby_g on 2005/06/28 15:05:36 |
tha_cheek
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Posted - 2005/06/28 : 16:35:35
Dats really good! what software do you use?
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bulby_g
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Posted - 2005/06/28 : 19:36:20
Cheers :) I use FLstudio, Vanguard and a few other vst's.
Anyone else gonna take a listen?
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Edited by - bulby_g on 2005/06/29 14:04:09 |
Ionosphere
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Posted - 2005/06/29 : 20:20:50
The lead riff uses Major and Minor notes and, it's too hard to explain here, but...
it somehow ain't doing it, imo.
Production's good though....
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bulby_g
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Posted - 2005/06/29 : 21:25:25
Ok cheers Iono I think its gonna get scrapped anyhow due to bad feedback not on here but with othere people so I think ill just get on with something new.
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