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bulby_g
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 Posted - 2005/07/06 : 00:08:52
http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?PID=583776&t=1668
Another new freeform track please have a listen and tell me what ya think.
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bulby_g
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 Posted - 2005/07/06 : 14:04:26
no one? that bad eh? if you dont like it feel free to say so I dont mind thats why I posted it.
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Posted - 2005/07/06 : 14:17:43
Nah it's good mate:) I liked it!
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Posted - 2005/07/06 : 14:22:37
Cheers mate :) glad someone posted was giving up hope anyone was even gonna listen to it.
Anyone else.......
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Posted - 2005/07/06 : 14:59:48
Phat tune man 
ur damn good
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# iTS aLL aBOUT bEATS -- aLL aBOUT bASS #
#aLL aBOUT hARDCORE -- aLL aBOUT rAVES#
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# iTS aLL aBOUT bEATS -- aLL aBOUT bASS #
#aLL aBOUT hARDCORE -- aLL aBOUT rAVES#
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Ionosphere
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Posted - 2005/07/06 : 18:26:11
I would have liked the riff at the start to continue when the Kick comes in.
Love the half speed break.
Vocals could do with being clearer.
Wicked and different mate.
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tha_cheek
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Posted - 2005/07/06 : 18:48:27
Brill tune keep it up!
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Posted - 2005/07/06 : 19:24:11
Cheers guys :)
Ionosphere will try and sort the vocal best I can but it was a bit fuzzy to start with but I can prob make it clearer than it is, I assume you mean the vocs in the break? Is the note progression ok in the lead after the break? Im never to sure definitely something I need to put some time into learning about.
I've noticed that the bass is a bit too deep and drags a bit on a sub will try and sort that & the section after the lead is a bit choppy as well needs cleaning up, ill also look at extending the riff at the start and adding a new one to the section after the break.
Glad people like it so far will continue working on it and post on here when I’m done if anyone has any advice/comments in the meantime will be happy to hear them :)
ps Ionoshpere glad you like the fact its different ;)
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Posted - 2005/07/06 : 20:27:38
real cool track, u get better and better all the time. i really liked the vocals u used they are always cool! where do u get em? the production sounds good 2.
also like iono said , as soon as the kick came the pattern changed that was a lil wierd. the only part that i didnt like and think u could do better is the breakdown.
the pads are cool but they change 2 much u should just keep a simple patter. i also didnt like the breakbeat samples, use better drums. and lastly the riff that follows. i just think it doesnt belong. make a new one. if u fixed all that u would have a hot track.
i noticed the structure is much better this time.
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Posted - 2005/07/06 : 20:43:33
Cheers icex mate will take a look at the breakdown and the melody after the break and see what I can do with it :)
My samples are from here there and everywhere off the web, films, tv, other music tracks etc just record to my laptop and edit & chop as necessary.
Anyone else got any comments before I start tearin into it?
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Posted - 2005/07/06 : 22:55:22
imo, all the vocals need to be clearer and louder, not just in the breakdown.
The breakdown could be shorter. I expected it to bang back in after the slow break beat.
You mentioned the deep bass dragging a bit. Yeh, it makes it sound out of time.
The note progression after the break is cool, it's different and uniquely 'bulby g style'.
It does need a bit of work..... (I'll PM you about it).
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Posted - 2005/07/07 : 14:14:26
The other samples are playing 4 times 1 after another which is probably why they sound fuzzy. I was trying to get a grainy feel it didnt come out exactly as planned I suppose what i'm trying to get is the first letter of the sample to stutter eg. t t t t terror (if you get me) but havn't figured exactly how to do it yet? They also have a bit of distortion on them so ill turn that down a notch and see if that helps.
I had thought about removing the bit after the breakbeat i'll have another look at it.
The bass I think could be sorted by eq'ing there is just too much low on it correct me if i'm wrong though.
If you could pm/email me about the melody would me much apreciated mate :)
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Posted - 2005/07/07 : 15:56:58
That is great stuff...your best yet.
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Posted - 2005/07/08 : 14:08:51
Cheers mate :)
New version is on the way just need to do something to the melody after the break which Ionosphere is very helpfully talking me through, will post when its done.
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