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CorDharel
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Switzerland
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 Posted - 2005/10/02 : 05:32:57
hi everyone!
A friend of mine showed me makina, and I just loved it! Now I did it by myself, and I must say, I am impressed!
Til today, I put many different things in my track. Now I did the opposite: Put in less things, but the rights.
You can hear the output for yourself. BTW u are allowed to laugh when I sing 
Download: http://cordharel.bachi.net/sound/CorDharel-Mountainstuff.mp3 (~6mb)
The song is about the boring swiss people who lives in the mountain and don't know hardcore and they are also so big losers ecetera *irony* 
I am looking forward to hear ur feedback.
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Uproar
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United Kingdom
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Posted - 2005/10/02 : 15:23:56
I liking this one. I laughed when you sing "you are so ****ing boring...."
Overall Score: 6/10
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Evel
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United Kingdom
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Posted - 2005/10/02 : 17:40:43
7/10 mainly for the drum roll beat
funny track, the vocals arn't that bad compared to myself if i was to sing LOL
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Jon O-T
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Posted - 2005/10/02 : 17:53:49
Sorry mate can't say it's my favorite one of yours. 5/10. The beats and claps are a bit 2 fast IMO. And the gap in the middle without the heavy beats & bass is 2 long IMO. But it werent 2 bad :).
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CorDharel
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Switzerland
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Posted - 2005/10/02 : 19:16:33
I love this one  Its the first track I think is like the many makina tracks i got recently.
Hmm right, u dont know: I am training to become a dj, and thats why I heard many makina tracks at the weekend when I was playing at a party, and so I know stuff that I can insert into my tracks from now on
Ah right, what is a "drum roll beat"?
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Evel
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United Kingdom
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Posted - 2005/10/02 : 20:24:47
quote:
Originally posted by CorDharel:
I love this one Its the first track I think is like the many makina tracks i got recently.
Hmm right, u dont know: I am training to become a dj, and thats why I heard many makina tracks at the weekend when I was playing at a party, and so I know stuff that I can insert into my tracks from now on
Ah right, what is a "drum roll beat"?
erm, cound of sounds like the kind of thing soumone does at the beggining of a count down, I am never good at explaining things, sorry LOL 
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eLASTIC and The Top Secret Crew
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Antarctica
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Posted - 2005/10/03 : 09:56:43
Different and amusing in places.
The Top Secret Crew.
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dj_excy
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United Kingdom
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 Posted - 2005/10/03 : 10:12:34
thats kool
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zippy
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Posted - 2005/10/03 : 13:39:06
the claps are quite 'remember tunish' and the 'base' hoover at the starts on the right lines.
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Priest
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Canada
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Posted - 2005/10/03 : 22:16:54
aight, i laughed when you started singing but it wasn't critical. it was one of those 'f*ckin awsome' laughs. and i got nothing wrong with the claps, very distinctive. as for that bass *claps* (if you get what i'm saying). But i must say the visualizer i had playing really made the track sweet :) (battery:randomization)
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lucificifus
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United States
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Posted - 2005/10/04 : 03:38:31
really weak synths, sorry, very boring
<-- makina snob :D
HOWEVER! I am never one to give critisism without constructive feedback! SO!
Listen to this song:
http://www.sbthq.net/audio/realaudio/makinationv10.ram
Then, like... do that with your songs. :D
Things to look at:
Bassline vs. Kick Drum
the bassline is actually really important in makina. Look for subtle bass grooves AND kick drums :)
Stutter vocals
they are good. use them
rough synth:
the synth is melodic but REALLY razors edge hard. try for that in your modulator. And for the love of all things holy, go get some modular synths off of ebay, your good enough now that its worth the investment :D
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yaddam205
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United States
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Posted - 2005/10/04 : 19:33:10
what did i say take time and things will work out!
This trax is much better in comparison to the stuff you used to post,
Good Job,  one for u
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CorDharel
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Switzerland
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Posted - 2005/10/05 : 14:13:55
Boah f*ck when I listen to the track very loud I love the part at 2:42 when the fast part comes into play
Woohoo I did it! Yaddam likes one of my track 
Hmm now I notice the track sounds more chinese than swiss but easy no problem
BTW: I think the singing sounds a lil bit like Blink182 
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Edited by - CorDharel on 2005/10/05 14:14:50 |
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