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XtarsiA
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United Kingdom
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 Posted - 2006/03/15 : 11:15:31
very unique tune here i think... im not finished with it, (ie im not fully satisfied with the results so far)
layout needs some changes.. ect ect
have a listen plz , and im afer some suggestions/advice/random coments :D
http://www.xtarsia.com/temp/yayness.mp3
lemme know what u think!!
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FriedRice
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Posted - 2006/03/15 : 11:38:05
Hey man, nice track, cant comment on the mixin coz ahhh i know nothin of it lol but its a good song could probably improve a bit but good none the less
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Ionosphere
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Posted - 2006/03/15 : 14:44:06
Musically, melodically it is excellent, unlike some of the stuff that labels have released lately
but now you need to master the art of production, it's all a bit 'muddy' atm.
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Leto
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Posted - 2006/03/15 : 14:52:07
Some of your best production yet. But, the intro seems to lack some of the energy of your other work.
The ambient twinkly noises could be turned down a bit.
Nice work with the percussion. And of course, it gets amazing in the breakdown.
Do you mind if I use this in my latest mix, XtarsiA?
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Fishy
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Posted - 2006/03/15 : 15:16:30
Really good!! YEA
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Slasher
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Posted - 2006/03/15 : 18:20:11
very nice song.
thats all i can say, i dont have any constructive criticism.
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bulby_g
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United Kingdom
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Posted - 2006/03/15 : 18:25:34
Great track but the levels seem a bit too all over the place at the moment.
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XtarsiA
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Posted - 2006/03/15 : 20:33:04
muddy, and levels all over the place..
well... laptop speakers.
and yes, i know about this lack of energy in the intro... thats one thing im not fully satisfied about - its missing something, or needs changeing completely!.
lately, i find i can make mellodys, and all the musical side of things..
just puttin all of em together into a structured song..
and then mix-down, mastering... seems (alot) more chalenging.
cant help feel abit depressed from it all sometimes lol.
(though always rewarding once uve finished and got something really cool to show!)
djleto, u can use it in a mix, though its not the final product yet!
Im glad everyone like it so far!
i'll go do some more..slaving lol
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Da Cunney Bugz
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Posted - 2006/03/15 : 22:08:49
lol the chimes are mad the way they cross over, gr8 track
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