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CorDharel
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Switzerland
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 Posted - 2007/08/06 : 18:07:21
Hey guys!
Here is my nomination for the price "best storyline in a happy hardcore track" 
http://cordharel.bachi.net/sound/CorDharel-TheLittlePartyElf.mp3
my friend ruffage from purefocus.ca mastered it for me
enjoy!
I welcome your feedback
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Edited by - CorDharel on 2007/08/06 18:10:50 |
LS
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Germany
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Joined: Jun, 2006
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 Posted - 2007/08/07 : 01:36:03
Good work
Sounds more professional than "What Hardcore?", but it had the better melody.
LittlePartyElf is a bit boring, too less variation in the middle part and the end
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CorDharel
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Switzerland
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Posted - 2007/08/08 : 12:09:44
Hey LS
Thanks for your opinion. I understand that it doens't have such variation like "What Hardcore", cause I wanted to build the story like that. The little party elf should play a concert with his new synthesizer, thats why I didn't change the synth at the end.
I will try to make better variation and melodies in the next track, especially cause I will get a new synthesizer for my music production 
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Edited by - CorDharel on 2007/08/08 12:15:20 |
CorDharel
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Switzerland
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Posted - 2007/08/08 : 12:11:40
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Edited by - CorDharel on 2007/08/08 12:14:15 |
CorDharel
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Switzerland
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Posted - 2007/08/08 : 12:13:53
(Sorry pressed "quote" instead of "edit" 2 times... I guess I worked too much today)
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Edited by - CorDharel on 2007/08/08 12:14:58 |
Ruffage
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Canada
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Joined: May, 2001
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Posted - 2007/08/08 : 18:31:56
I think the story in this track is hilarious :)
And a bit improvement in production since your previous tracks too.
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Mr igloo
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United States
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Joined: Dec, 2004
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Posted - 2007/08/09 : 02:53:51
Cor Dharel, You are insane  . But, Its a good track in all its bizarreness.
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Dain-Ja
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Canada
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Posted - 2007/08/09 : 15:00:46
You're definately getting better
I think you should get in the studio with someone that has some releases. Your tracks are creative and fun but there's some elements to your production that are annoying (for example, the percussion in this track is slightly off which is irritating).
Good ideas, although you are very cheesy, but there's some basic stuff that would improve the track by tenfold if they were fixed.
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CorDharel
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Switzerland
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Posted - 2007/08/09 : 15:08:46
lol I am insane? how come? 
@Dain-Ja
I know what you mean. I will take my time for the next track to make better drums, cause now i just used the standard stuff with kick, clap, percuassion and so on, nothing special. I am going to buy some drum samples from vengeance and try them out in my next track.
Thank you for your feedback I am glad you like the idea of wooden synthesizer!
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_BoNe_
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United Kingdom
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Posted - 2007/08/09 : 15:20:40
Haha, well enjoyed listening to that track.
Not listened to any of your stuff for quite a while now, this track is miles better than the other stuff i've heard
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Dain-Ja
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Canada
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Posted - 2007/08/09 : 15:52:05
standard sounds are fine, it's just that some of the elements are a bit off beat which is irritating lol (kinda like the classic hixxy kick from b trax :P)
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CorDharel
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Switzerland
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Posted - 2007/08/10 : 12:46:20
Weird... I didn't realize that... 
I am already thinking about ideas for a new track... and darn! I can't wait anymore! I will buy the synth Nexus tommorrow and not in 10 days.
I can't take it anymore waiting for that thing Know that feeling?
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