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John89
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United Kingdom
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 Posted - 2008/04/06 : 12:30:11
just finished a new track tell me what you think on it please good or bad of course :)
cheers
http://www3.speedyshare.com/data/600111124/10190920/23182374/The%20Way.mp3
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jenks
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United Kingdom
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Posted - 2008/04/06 : 16:15:44
The vocals sound out of sync to me.
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MAtRiCks
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Canada
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Posted - 2008/04/06 : 16:36:46
yep, the vocal sounds off.
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Wilky
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Posted - 2008/04/06 : 21:07:36
why has my reply been deleted?
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coopshire
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United States
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Posted - 2008/04/06 : 23:15:01
downloading...downloading...
OK!
as the others said the vocals dont match
i also think its weak... nothing not even a foot tap....
it needs work....
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djbuzz1021
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United Kingdom
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Posted - 2008/04/07 : 00:04:32
need some work bud, Like the riff sounds you have used, I do think that the tune is good but you need to work on it a bit more, Could be a tad faster too. Where u chopped and cut the vocals up dose not really work but i do see what you were trying to achieve,
Vocals need serious work.
But I would like to hear this when its fully finished,
Good effort keep trying.
Buzz
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roundhead711
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United Kingdom
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Posted - 2008/04/07 : 02:35:23
As the others said the vocals are out and i think it sounds a bit cheesy with the chopped up vocals at the start .
But really like the riff.
And the bass has got nice soft touch to it.
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protonic
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Hungary
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Posted - 2008/04/10 : 18:07:45
Without the vocal it would be much better! Try to make the vocal faster (or the whole song slower) and it will be ok 
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