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Lynny
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Hungary
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 Posted - 2008/11/18 : 20:41:30
Hi, hi!
I have just finished my latest tune, Memories! Plz, comment!:)
Vocals, lyrics, mellodies made by myself.
Hope you will enjoy it!
http://www.myspace.com/minilynny
or for better quality: http://rave.hu/letoltes.php?id=663 "Letöltés"=download:)
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FingazMc
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United Kingdom
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Posted - 2008/11/18 : 21:54:52
quite a nice uplifting track :)
Youve got a really nice voice aswell :)
Good job
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choonland
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Colombia
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Posted - 2008/11/18 : 21:55:21
in my opinion, the vocals lacks a little bit of energy
however it is still a good job!
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Edited by - choonland on 2008/11/18 22:10:23 |
damo.2008
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Western Sahara
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Posted - 2008/11/18 : 23:31:20
I reckon all your tracks are good , keep up the good work eh..
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SPOOX
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United Kingdom
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Posted - 2008/11/19 : 00:13:31
Pretty decent track but it's missing something but i can't quite figure out what.
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Ionosphere
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United Kingdom
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Posted - 2008/11/19 : 01:10:41
Lynny, it's lovely. 
In my opinion the only thing that's missing is the experience in polished production.
As a composition it's top notch. A really good song.
If it was remixed by a 'professional' it would be great.
Keep at it.
....and yes, as FingazMC says, you have a really nice voice as well.
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Trimms
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United States
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Posted - 2008/11/19 : 02:30:08
I dig for the most part.
The biggest thing that bothers me is the volume of the claps. Sorry, a bit picky! But you have a great voice. I just wish the track itself had more depth.
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SPOOX
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Posted - 2008/11/19 : 09:25:14
Maybe it is that professional touch that's missing but yeah i do like it & you do have a good voice.
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DjJosh12102
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United Kingdom
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 Posted - 2008/11/19 : 09:32:57
Yeah vocals were dullish. But very good track still
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Miikkii
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Australia
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Posted - 2008/11/19 : 10:42:35
duno if it was or not. But if it was professionally mastered and stuff all those little problems would fade away :)
My opinion its a great track, your voice is really good. Keep up the good work :)
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Starstruck
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Australia
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Posted - 2008/11/19 : 11:11:45
Hmm.
It sounds cool!
Things are really thin.
Nice voice too! Lacking tone though.
Production needs some attention so does arrangement and sampling.
Pretty cool though!
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Audio X
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Posted - 2008/11/19 : 15:13:25
Good job! As said before, composition is great. It's the production that needs some work.
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Ken Masters
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United Kingdom
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Posted - 2008/11/19 : 15:27:14
Great little track this! Its got a great, old skool feel to it. It sounds like its from simpler times 
Keep it up Lynny & I hope to see many more from you 
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TheOneNOnly
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United States
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Posted - 2008/11/19 : 20:19:22
As said before the voice needs a little tone to it.
It doesn't stand out at all imo, it just seems to hide behind the music.
Still a good track, but as always anything could be better in non-"mastered" tracks.
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