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ozmium
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 Posted - 2009/02/14 : 23:36:25
hey just hear me out i know all my other songs sucked ass just tell me how to improv on this one http://www.looperman.com/profile.php?mod=tracks&mid=219609
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TypeR
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Posted - 2009/02/15 : 00:51:24
it's getting better, but since this is a hardcore forum, maybe try making a hardcore track instead.
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atomsk
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Posted - 2009/02/15 : 01:40:41
i like all the leads, and bass's, but not the kick, it sounds way out of place.
it sounds to hard, mabe a club-er kick?
but the snare break sounds good, so just change the kick
imo
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ozmium
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 Posted - 2009/02/15 : 02:24:47
thx guys ur alot of help
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Ionosphere
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Posted - 2009/02/15 : 23:58:45
Also it's about 136bpm and if you want it to be Hardcore it really needs to be nearer 170.
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